|Reviews for Sins of the Past|
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/29/2015
Two years ago I started reading this The Shade Universe stories and I loved them. They were so intense and real I got to this story so I knew about River. Well, in two years I've forgotten everything that lead up to River losing her memory. I started rereading the series and as I neared the end of Sins of The Past I actually started crying because I was so engrossed and so attached to the characters that I wasn't sure if I wanted to keep reading but I did and I just want to say that I love these stories and I wish they were actual books so I could buy them and read them all the time.
| Tessa chapter 31 . 12/9/2014
I've telly enjoyed the shade series xx
| karen1025 chapter 31 . 3/18/2014
Please write a happy ending, pretty please with sugar on top.
| GunnerDarling1894 chapter 31 . 11/5/2013
Your stories are fantastic! I love the Shade series and I can't wait to start on the next one.
| LoneWolfOneill chapter 31 . 8/14/2013
I don't know how I missed your first Shade story, but I did. I started reading your current one only to realize it was a series. I've read the all now and I'm very impressed.
You have great talent and imagination. The depth of fireflys characters is phenomenal as is the one created. I can't say enough about your talent. Please continue as there is Malcolm/Inaras wedding, kaylees baby and much morw. Thank you for the entertainment.
| deanandjo4ever1 chapter 31 . 7/29/2013
Omg horribly depressing but amazing loved the dune boom ref my husband is a huge frank herbert fan has almost all of the books i thinl i might finally be catching up on this wonderful series i have unearthed
| BIGDAMNGRIZZLYBEAR chapter 31 . 5/12/2013
So, is Liam going to take up Jayne's family traditions, since he seems so much like him? I can definitely see him wanting to learn some of Jayne's Native ways. Would definitely be a good plot base for a new series of stories, too. Just sayin',...
| jaadkins chapter 31 . 5/7/2013
Just reread all of the Shadevers and already going thru withdrawals. Hope you continue the story...soon. I'm already starting to twitch.
| USAFChief chapter 31 . 4/28/2013
It's been almost two years since you published this, so you've had time to write the finale sequel that put's River back where she belongs. Hope to see it soon.
I have enjoyed all the stories you have written. When I first saw Spartan, I thought that I would pass on it since Jayne as a vampire did not hold any interest for me. However after reading the first two chapters of it I was really hooked. This Shade verse is just as good. Really enjoyable.
I hope your life is treating you well and that you will post that Shade sequel here on ffn. Thanks much for giving me a fine time the past couple of weeks.
| DancingRaven chapter 31 . 4/15/2013
This story is wonderful! I hope there is a continuation! :)
| Doctor MisFire chapter 31 . 2/23/2013
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! This was by far my favourite story. Ever. Of all time. I love the character development and I'm kinda speechless, not gonna lie, this story was that good. However, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue writing this story I must know if River gets her memories back! I'm just going to reiterate just how awesome this story was.
| Count Isac chapter 31 . 1/18/2013
You need to continue ths story. Love must prevail. I must see Jayne help river to regain her memory...must.
| Aurilia chapter 31 . 12/4/2012
I actually like how there isn't a storybook ending on this one. It's taken me the better part of three days to read through all the Shade 'verse, and I enjoyed every single bit of it! (I even managed to have a Firefly dream last night, set in this 'verse!) The only thing (aside from a few typos that made me have to reread a couple of passages here and there) that I think should be added, and this can be done in a small onefer, is Kaylee's baby. Really, that's it.
Spectacular job, and I really do hope to see more in this 'verse in the future!
| angelheart92 chapter 31 . 10/20/2012
please right another continuation of the shade verse. i dont think i am the only person who wants this
| Guest chapter 31 . 9/16/2012
I reallt enjoy this 'verse and I really hope you write more of it I was on the edge of my seat the entire time and I really want to find out what happens to river pleeeeeease write more.