Reviews for Jump City Jump
ace1 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Just a fan of your mlp works, with a single, out of place iquiry... are you, specifically, either an aesthetic-level existentialist or nietzche's overman?
Lifestyle chapter 15 . 5/27/2014
Hey! Still awesome
Lifestyle chapter 14 . 5/27/2014
still awesome.
Lifestyle chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
This is actually a review for the last chapter but it looks like I already reviewed that one... Anyway, really enjoyed reading Courtney's flashback to the JLA days. Actually, I really enjoy reading about Courtney period. You really make transform her into an awesome character with a lot of heart. Her team was really interesting. I actually looked up a little about Stargirl because I'm not very familiar with her. It's pretty cool reading up a little bit on her past and seeing how you incorporate those characters into a story here.

And your actions scenes are still phenomenal (of course). Best I've ever read.
Lifestyle chapter 22 . 5/27/2014
Dang. Last chapter. Not sure if you even still check reviews for this story, but reading this last chapter was hard knowing there isn't another. You've got me hooked again...
Lifestyle chapter 8 . 5/27/2014
I miss this
MarieAlexander chapter 21 . 12/26/2011
I actually reviewed the next chapter before this one, but I realized I hadn't given a full review and I'm not allowed to review the same chapter twice.

There is something to be admired in this story of how the characters are made truly human, or life-like rather. Not only do you give them faults but you are able to successfully pull their personalities into the light. The intricacies your stories provide I find fascinating and is most likely the reason I am drawn to your writing.

I'm not sure which chapter it's in, but the description of how Jump City got it's name was quite ingenious. Honestly I didn't watch more than eight episodes of the actual Teen Titans tv show (most of what I know comes from These Black Eyes...) so I don't know if you came up with that or the writers of the show, but the philosophies described along with it I found interesting.

The fact that the scroll bar on the side of the screen is so very small is something I must applaud you for. Very few writers have the patience, will, and dedication it takes to write such long chapters within an even longer story. I am genuinely frightened you will abandon this story, considering it has been seven months since you last updated, but Jump City Jump will remain on my story alert list.

Have a great day POST.

-Synphilia
MarieAlexander chapter 22 . 12/14/2011
Seriously. Whats with the "nao" and the "hao"? I know you can spell dude. What happened?

Other than that I'm really enjoying this story and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Razvanor chapter 22 . 6/21/2011
Hopefully, this lovely li'l gem doesn't stall here. Continue to do what you do best (supposedly, unless you have some hidden talent for bowling, or something).

-Raz
Razvanor chapter 20 . 6/20/2011
Hmm, seems as if Robin has more or less given up on Noir. Poor fella. Hope is hard to come by, these days, more expensive than gold.

-Raz
Razvanor chapter 16 . 6/20/2011
Mm, the plot thickens. Why do I always seem to return to your stories when you've ceased writing them? Ah, the boon of my fanfiction existence.

-Raz
Razvanor chapter 13 . 6/7/2011
Mmm, I do enjoy stories about Koriand'r, although it does all sound vaguely familiar. ;D

-Raz
Razvanor chapter 5 . 5/26/2011
S'far as I can tell, you're doctrine's pretty good. Heh. Wyrd. I make no assumptions based on that fact, however.

Anywho, I feel these chappies are a little slow going. Char development is a wonderful thing, but overload is not. Regardless, you do it well.

-Raz
Razvanor chapter 3 . 5/23/2011
I'm utterly curious of whether or not you've ever read any of Gene Wolfe's works. I don't know, but I just think you'd enjoy him. Rambling prose, deep discussions with allusions to hidden truths, a little bit of love for blood. All that's missing are incredibly archaic Latin and Greek words. Hah!

I see Noir is skirting the outer edges of the story in his misty way. Have I mentioned I've missed him? Because I've missed him.

-Razvanor
A reader chapter 22 . 5/21/2011
I know this might be asking a lot. I am hoping this is actually you, but could you repost "Between the Walls". I am unable to find it and would very much like to reread an excellent fic.
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