Reviews for Jump City Jump |
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Razvanor chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 My dear friend, why is it you keep coming back up? Not that I complain, of course, but your fanfiction corpse, resurrected over and over, must be tired by now. But I understand your drive to re-insert yourself into the world that gave you such joy, in my opinion, as in the days of TBE (especially Act One). I know the same feeling. Regardless, I'm glad to have you back, for however long your body remains animated. Also, looks like your picking up with an alternate version of WAFFLES (or WWFFA, whatever). -Raz |
G.O chapter 22 . 5/13/2011 I am so glad to have the golem back. That was very touching when he spoke to his mother, his True Creator. What was so amazing about this chapter was how together Victor was, like was in harmony with himself, just getting it all right the second he wakes up. The vigilante ban was going to happen. Perhaps not for long...? Of course you do. It's downright Jacob's Ladder!" Beast Boy stuck his tongue out. "Also a good movie; borrowed it from a library a few weeks ago" It is a great movie. Next thing you know, Victor's mother reads his palms claiming his death, then watches an erotic monster moment in a Brooklyn apartment. Ha, INFER. IMPLY. who the fuck cares? Fuck sake, the Apokolips is involved now? It's only Act One... Also love how Robin just tends to cut in at the most appropriate time. More of that plz Anyway, looking forward to see how they tackle Antithesis next chapter, if it happens? G.O(d's Sacrifice) |
anon chapter 22 . 5/12/2011 Free trade and enterprise is the only thing that has ever led to long lasting meaningful peace, the best and brightest will elevate themselves above the common man as long as they don’t kill anyone or otherwise actively oppress they should be allowed to earn as much as they can there will always be some exploitation it’s nature it’s best for our species it improves the standard of living for the human race as a whole |
That Guy chapter 21 . 5/10/2011 "You inferred it." "You Inferred It." "YOU INFERRED IT." AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Robin IMPLIED. Raven inferred from his implication. I find it hard to believe that Raven's character would make that mistake, so that leaves you. |
G.O chapter 21 . 5/10/2011 What a great chapter, especially representating mother's day (Whether intentional or not). Blake Grover. Wonder what his horrible thoughts were after Victor's death? I love the perspectives all the characters have, especially towards Robin being the leader. I'm just counting down the chapters to see it happen. And I should've guessed the damn ending, the chapter titled The Third Birth and whatnot... Not much else to say, just looking forward to the revival. G.0(od Times) |
anon chapter 21 . 5/9/2011 The identification of a problem is not the same as coming up with a tangible solution to it, it takes a lot of long, hard, boring work all day every day most likely for generations Power is merely a tool it also takes competence to take into account economics and politics of a real world tangible solution |
G.O chapter 20 . 5/7/2011 "The media tears everything apart. They're the televised equivalent to a starving ferret with a parokeet." That was funny. The ending wasn't. I'm hoping that this isn't the end. Fingers Crossed, - G.O |
knight of the forgotton chapter 20 . 5/7/2011 I freaking love this story and this your a monstrous cock bite for the cliff hanger. Update soon or i shall slaughter an orphan or some other nefarious thing to make you update quickly. |
Fallen Dragonfly chapter 20 . 5/7/2011 Downs are contrasted by ups. I wonder if its time now, in a great fall, for a mighty rise? |
spiritghostings chapter 20 . 5/7/2011 you are a whore. that is all. |
spiritghostings chapter 19 . 5/5/2011 beast boy have my babies. |
G.O chapter 19 . 5/5/2011 Yanno what? I was about send a really good review and the PC crashed. So I leave you with a condensed version: Love jokes about N-Gage. Don't love Cyborg having no soul. Love Robin's entries. Don't love his fear for Acronyms. BYE Titans, G.O! |
Fallen Dragonfly chapter 19 . 5/5/2011 The masked family never did have any luck. |
That Guy chapter 18 . 5/3/2011 "I could frankly care less." "Frankly, I couldn't care less." FTFY |
Zephyrus-Prime chapter 18 . 5/3/2011 Everyone keeps forgetting that the though the Devil is fond of lies, truth serves him so much better. Trigon is being especially sneaky here. He knows that he has all the time in the universe, literally, to wait for Raven to come to him. All he has to do is be patient and play the doting father. I have a hard time believing that an eons old demon is capable of love in the way that he's attempting to convince Raven that he loves her. I'm guessing that since he's spent so many years observing humanity that he is capable of acting out the emotion. Giving her the ole onetwo combo of Logic and Love is bound to wear Raven down eventually. I kinda agree with G.O. You write good chapters, but the time skips... *Zeph puts on shades* ...are getting old. YEAHHHHHHHHHHH! I await your next chapter. Vic can go fry his motherboard or something. I want to see more Robin tracking down Wildcard. -Xeno AKA Zephyrus |