Reviews for One Step Towards Never
bamagal110 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
why would they need to hide their affair from anyone they were both single in the first place and it is so sweet Peter is protective of her already
TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Once again, you hit the ground running and hooked me! You always do, but this time my interest is more than peaked. Personally, I'm glad Bella is ride of Edward. I've never felt they "belong". You know what I mean? Trust me, this story is already favorited (I trust the caliber of your work THAT much.)and on alert. I'll be looking forward to more.

P.S. I was also glad to see a rather paternal Marcus. I've always felt he could use a good cuddle and hug to make him WANT to live.
InsaneGrizzlies chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Hmmm, very interesting. I do have to say I was kinda grinning a bit at how sweet Marcus was, I always thought he was the coolest of the brothers... ;D lol

Can't wait to read more! :) UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Madam Minx chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
good so far but i desperatly need more peter was searching her like a mate would to see if she was injured so is he going to be one of them and what about jasper or markus ahhhh to suspensful more more more pleeesssee
BbyBella chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Omg the story sounds realy good I can't wait for the next update and pluse to find out whose Bella true mate .?I don't know why but I have funny feelling it Jasper but I have no clue
meggie1824 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This story has a wonderful beginning, the writing is magnificent, the plot looks really well done so far and I'm using too many adjectives :P And mateS? More than one! PLURAL? I'm so excited whose chosen -quietly hopes Jasper is one of them- Hope another chapter comes soon :)
fish525 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This story has an interesting premise. I am anxiuos to read more.
kirifox chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Interesting start! Looking forward to finding out who her "mates" are. Is one of them Jasper? (Please, please, please!)
gredelina1 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Intriguing first chapter! What? Why? How? I've got too many questions right now... I'll just say 'Master' Whitlock? Mates? Plural? Can't wait to get some more information!
KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I wonder who her mate is suppose to be
sweetmel21 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Is 'mates' as a plural intentional? And now she only has a bit over a year to find her mate/s. Wow I can't wait to hear that rest of this story.
JessJess76 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Ok that was absolutely amazing and I am really looking forward to reading more. It is a different premise and even better, Edward is a jerk (sometimes he just annoys me, sometimes I adore him). I can't wait to find out who Bella's mate is - I suppose I could guess, but I want to let it unfold. Great start! :)
Wine and Cheesy chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Good stuff so far. So does Bella need to find her mate or is it mates in the plural? Peter seemed rather possesive if you ask me.

Looking forward to reading more!
Ella Whitlock chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Dawn! Now that's an awesome to start to a story. Love it. Well written and worded.
Taylor Whitlock chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
that is great please add more soon!
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