|Reviews for If I stay: Mia's poem|
| susan chapter 1 . 3/5
its really good
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
IS this quote from the book? or did you rite it?
| Colourful Darkness chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
This was such a creative beautifully written poem
| behind.my.bright.blue.eyes chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
wow. that was beautiful. amazing. incredible. awesome. wow.
| BillyBuddy1209 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
AWWWW! You should write more poems like this for sure! :)
| g-hope-love-life chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
i know im late but this is amazing
| larkgrace chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Awww, I love it! This poem really touched me.
| undeadheart chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Oh my, this is awesome.
You got me crying with that poem and that's really something remarkable.
Keep writing you are talented. :)
| ConcreteAngelRoxHerHalo chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
this is really good!
| midnightandcounting chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
It's beautiful. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing huge. I think you really touched some of the heart of the book and Mia's choice. The beginning is a litte confusing though. I don't really understand what you mean by "I close my eyes and hear a voice, It tells me what to do and say, When it's time to run away." Do you mean that she is passively existing or something else? Maybe you could make that clearer. All in all, I loved it. Nice work!
| mockingjayde chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Hiii! I really liked your poem. I wrote one like it a while ago and posted it, and yours is so much better compared to mine. Mines just something I whipped up on the walk home. Yours is so much more poetic! I really enjoyed it.
The only thing is, the the end to your poem is the same line to the end of mine. I think maybe this is a coincidence, but I just wanted you to be aware. :)
Anyways, it's great. Keep writing! :DD
| Rochy-Rachy chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
kool love it