Reviews for He's Leaving Home
CaptureGod-Otamegane chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
really great story, wish all my older brothers gave me advice before i went off for school. Do you have any recommendations for stories written from people across the pond like yourself.
Woot-Lady chapter 5 . 11/12/2010

but this one is by far my favorite

it's so sweet and funny and makes me want to tell Ron that everythign is going to be okay.

brilliant stuff
HPLives chapter 5 . 11/9/2010
Hahaha, I loved it. Ron reminded me a lot of how my sister acted when I was heading off to college. Very lovely, and I'm excited to read more :)
Name chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
Okay, so I am going to be honest with you here; I have read every single chapter out of all of your fanfictions and I have yet to review. Please don't hate me! I'm just... I, uh... I'm a jerkface stupid head (I know, I can come up with some HORRIBLE insults). Really, I have no excuse except for being a lurker upon the site. If it makes you feel any better, this is the first time I have ever written a review on this website. Ever.

Now that I'm done trying to justify my reasons for never reviewing any of your stories, why don't I tell you why I felt the urge to finally leave a review. You see, I am aware that you're a fantastic author; I have been since I first started reading your works. But, only until recently did I realise that you're the reason Ron is my favorite character. Seriously, I used to be a Ron basher. AND I was a... Draco/Hermione shipper. Gasp. I am so glad those days are over. Luckily, before I could inflict any more damage and consider writing a fanfiction about said pairing, I found the light. And by the light, I mean your stories. Ughh, I realise how fangirly I sound, but I really think that your stories affected the way I even read the series now. Because of you, I have definitely learned to appreciate Ron so much more.

Now, I would like to give you my feedback on "He's Leaving Home". When I first saw that you had begun writing a new fanfiction, I was reluctant to read it at first, mainly because of my worries that it would affect your updating on "Biscuits: a Love Story", but I am pleasantly surprised. This isn't the type of story I'd go for usually, but your characterization is so spot on that I just had to give it a shot. I especially enjoyed the chapters with Charlie and Bill just because we see so little of them in the books. Somehow you managed to keep them in the little amount of character they had been given and yet expand on their characters as well. Whenever I think of Charlie or Bill, I will probably be thinking of the Charlie and Bill you created. Also, I just don't understand how you managed to make Percy so likable. Honestly, he's one of my least favorite charcters. For this wonderful ability you seem to have, I applaud you. Now, considering the review space is acting all wierd, I guess my review is over. Once more, you've done a fantastic job in the fanfiction world.

Keep it up!
allanfrontrow chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
Hi Pinky

I'm going to re-ask a question I asked long ago - are you sure you have no juvenile males around? I only ask because you have once again pitched Rons' questions just right.

Thanks for putting me straight on something I griped about first chapter - that Ron seemed to get the short end of the stick when it came to getting things new.

Bills' explaination of how things work was fine - pity Molly didn't do it. I don't think that it totally balances out but the playing field is certainly more level.

Bill is very good at putting a positive spin on things that get Ron down, especially school. Ron is certainly happier after this conversation - of course that could be a combination of ice cream, beer and spinnies.

One of the best things about this chapter is the intimacy you have managed to get between a man and a boy who by Bills' admission don't really know each other.



P.S. that's intimacy in the non-biblical sense.


sorah allin chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
I love the bromance between Ron and Bill!

Unlike your other stories, this is a more innocent and cute one, which is what makes it special.

Best regards!
aalens chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
I loved your Ron, and now I adore your Bill. Great chapter.
Megan chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
My favorite so far! I love Bill and Ron together- so cute! Great chapter! :)
tikincloks chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
This was very delightfully enjoyable to read!

So this is where Ron got the Spattergroit idea from :p

And Bill doesn't like to stick to British women does he now hehe

I love how deep you get into every character, your writing is more like expanding the canon world for me than just fan fiction (It sounded a bit blasphemous but you are that good!)

Hope you enjoy your vacation and you get plenty of inspiration to continue Biscuits
BennetZia chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
I love Bill!

haha, I really love the story your sutch a amazing author!
Joelle8 chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
YUS! Weasley brother-ship! :D Love it!
aria04 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
that was awesome! poor ron, must have been a bummer about the wand, no wonder he always felt like he wasnt good enough. HAHA molly and the cigarettes talk. cant wait to read fred and george. :)
Yluhve chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
this is the one of the touching chapters bysofar : I wish I had an older brother like Bill...

keep it up, can't wait for Arthur's turn 3
deedee chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
it shows that bill is a really nice brother. probably the best brother anyone could ask for
The Reserved Reader chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
I've changed my mind, Bill's advice is by far my favorite. It didn't even come across as advice but more as a bonding experience between the two. It was such a touching chapter. I have a younger sibling and there is a pretty reasonable gap between us, so I know how it feels to be there for their 'firsts' and feel like it's just come so fast. This really is my favorite chapter:)

I completely agree with BiliusSue's review! I love all the subtle references to the future you've incorporated. It seemed strange to me reading about Bill's 'girlfriend' only because I can only imagine him with Fleur, but they all did have their own lives before the books.

I'm looking forward to reading Arthur's chapter:)
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