Reviews for He's Leaving Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, was that not the end then? I thought that was the last chapter. Ah well. It was lovely, well done. Now I am all choked up with Ron love I shall go and read some of your other stuff, I think... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Arthur :'( bless you, arthur. I hate boarding school... The whole concept is so sad. Worst thing about Harry Potter. Every one of these chapters is adorable, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, Bill-Ron brotherhood is the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That... That was really sweet :') and Hogwarts: A History! Nice touch. I felt quite sorry for percy; this chapter demonstrated his fish-out-of-water state amongst the gryffindors, and by extention his family, in a very touching way. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT LETTER WAS SO ADORABLE AND FUNNY AND I LOVE CHARLIE SO MUCH! #overlookedawesomecharacters especially all the girl part. Very amusing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was both hillarious and very upsetting to read, because fred and george were so horrible... Well written, though :P |
![]() ![]() This is flawless. Everyone is done so well. I love Charlie's, Bill's and Ginny's and ARTHUR'S no one ever really depicts Arthur's role in the family and his relationship with Ron. (You did Molly, Percy, and Fred and George so well I loved this whole thing) |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love all of your stuff. You're such a talented writer! I know that this story is several years old and I don't know if you're still writing on a regular basis but I would love to see the eighth chapter of this story. It's wonderful by the way. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this chapter, you definitely did Bill justice! It seemed like the most natural and normal whilst also bringing something new to the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Do you wanna go and put pondweed in Percy's bed and pretend Fred and George did it?" A perfect ending to a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is exactly the type of letter 18 year old me would have written an 11 year old me. Now I'm curious about Charlie's stay at Hogwarts lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() My god, Ron! How can you be this gullible with those two for older siblings? Surely you realize everything they say is suspect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is adorable. |
![]() ![]() It does make a lot of sense that Ginny and Ron would be best friends ) I really like the idea for this story and the way you executed it! Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, these chapters just keep getting better! You have a knack of really bringing out a side of these characters that we don't get to see in the books ) And adding in some more background info that ties things together neatly. |