Reviews for He's Leaving Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You can see that Ron really thinks highly of Bill and Charlie and sees them as cool older brothers. It's really sweet how they get to bond for a few moments ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy is just like Hermione! teehee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favourite chapter so far. Charlie seems like such a cool older brother, he usually is just described that way but without much evidence that the audience gets to see. Thanks for bringing him to life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ron, his brothers are soo mean! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A story about Ron & the Weasley clan ) Very sweet! |
![]() ![]() I hate Peter now... I can't stand that he did this to Ron, but I see how he might have been trying to make up for it in his own way... Sad. |
![]() ![]() Aww poor Ron he doesn't seem to be doing so well for advice |
![]() ![]() This is amazing. Please update! The humour, the depiction of the characters...it's perfect. Please update! :) |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter but in the interest of canon, where's Fred's remark about wrestling a troll? Still, it was a nice chapter and I felt sorry for Ron! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the next and final chaptre...well,a year-old cliffy? Even we already know what'll happen (the nose dirt thingie) it's still fun to read it from someone who has a gift&talent with words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your chapters are like beautifully drawn portraits, windows into Ron as a character. I know I probably sound like a toady by now, but I can't help it - they're just so great! And I love that this story is proof that fiction on this site doesn't have to be in the romance section to be good - let's face it, lots of that stuff is trite and cliched anyways. Once again, great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Your writing always captures atmospheres so well - in this case, childhood innocence coupled with admiration for an older sibling. Reading this is an amazingly indulgent, nostalgic experience |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look at Ron, already forgetting what Charlie told him. Lol, us guys never learn do we? You've really given me new appreciation for Ron as a character - despite the many, many times I've read the books, I've seldom given a lot of thought to him. Now I can see him in a whole new light. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is funny, but also quite sad, cos I never thought seriously about what made Ron who he was, all the insecurities about expectations and achievement - I mean, I knew about them superficially, but never really considered them in the context of his character. Now I'm given a chance at witnessing them in a story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute. I love how it puts the spotlight on Ron, a character so often overlooked as a sidekick to Harry and sometimes even Hermione. It's easy to think of him as just a loyal, kinda silly third wheel to the trio but this chapter dispels all of that, giving him an origin and revealing his insecurities. Looking forward to the next chapter! |