Reviews for He's Leaving Home |
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![]() ![]() I love this story! It feels so... cannon. Is that the right word? I hope so. Are you going to put up another chapter, or is this (7) the last one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re-reading for the thousandth time... still as good as it always was! Can't wait for the final chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was looking forward to reading the Charlie-chapter. First when I saw that it was "only" a letter I was a bit disappointed because then he couldn't interact with Ron. But it really turned out so wonderfully perfect that I've nothing to say against it. You wrote Charlie just so nice and yeah...perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Ronnie! I cannot decide between feeling really sorry for him or finding this whole conversation rather funny. But weren't the twins supposed to tell him that he had to fight a troll or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the whole story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. My favourite chapter was Bill, how awesome is he? Charlie's chapter was a very close second. It is no suprise that this charlie is one of the classic scene/story stealer Charlie. A very well deserved title. Thanks very much for sharing I look foreward to reading the last chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was sweet and you did a really good Ron a character that is either really hard to do or most people don't bother |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO much love for Bill. He's utterly fantastic. Luggles x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahaa, cruel and fantastic :') x |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are really good. Whatever you decide to do next, whether it's as Pinky Brown or otherwise, I hope you make an announcement here and let everyone know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! I've never really thought about it but Ron and Ginny must have been close when they were younger. I love the way you wrote each of his relationships with each brother, all of it was very entertaining and so true to form of siblings. I think my favourite chapter after Ginny's was Bill's, it seams sort of sad that he missed out on so much of his family growing up and I love the parts where he was edging around talking about girls. I also loved how Charlies advice was basically Falling in Love With Hermione 101. A very good fic that shows a lot of Rons character and a great writing demonstration of how a kid can complain about things without being whiney. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D'aw! This is honestly one of the best HP fics I've read! I can just imagine all these circumstances, and are you sure you're not J.K. Rowling? Absolute BRILLIANT job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so lovely. I can't wait to read the last chapter...I do hope you haven't given up on it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the sweetest family fic I've seen~ Great job! |
![]() ![]() Loved loved Ron calling Scabbers a traitor. Another great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww they're all so sweet, I think I like this one and Bill's the best. Update soon and merry Christmas :) |