Reviews for The Awakening
Guest chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
Too bad this story wasn't finished. Totally interesting
radiate689 chapter 5 . 3/12/2013
uh oh
radiate689 chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
poor carlisle
radiate689 chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
radiate689 chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
radiate689 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
good start
Carlisle Cullen 19 chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
Gute Story bin gespannt
TomIsOnBottom chapter 5 . 11/29/2011
ugh! At the risk of sounding like a teen bopper; I'm soooooo hooked!

Please, please finish this story.

You're writing is excellent, well thought out, smart and funny.

The character development is perfect, all the details you want but not too wordy.

Please please update!
TomIsOnBottom chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Smart writing!

Loving the descriptions and dialogue so far! ;-)
Splushie Balls chapter 5 . 4/19/2011
I'm in love with your story! I'm anxious to know what's going to happen!
rugby35 chapter 5 . 4/10/2011
can't wait for more!
Vane3131 chapter 5 . 3/7/2011
Omg I need more of this story please
Siobhan IRL chapter 5 . 1/16/2011
I am enjoying the story and your character development. If you are still looking for a beta-reader, I'd like to find out more about what is involved. I have a background in proof-reading and copy-editing and would be willing to work with you on this story.

gredelina1 chapter 5 . 1/14/2011
I'm definitely left wanting more! That was an evil little chapter! You're such a tease! ;) I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story!
gredelina1 chapter 4 . 1/14/2011
Wow! Lots of raw emotions in this chapter! I love how you've taken the canon story and twisted it into something completely different and yet strikingly the same! The struggles between one's desires and morals, darkness and innocence, control and instincts... Brilliant!
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