this was so incredible! The action! The suspense! The longing! 10/10 would recommend

LMAO
I love your sanity updates as much as your story.
It seems we have the same thoughts and conclusions of
SM and how she writes.
You're brilliant.
LOL

thats the end? Where exactly was the conclusion to all of this?

Lol didnt you wrote a sequal tho

I honestly don't understand how someone can keep up steady complaints about Meyer's work while also copying and pasting her work word for word. If the author didn't like the writing of Twilight in the first place, then why write a fanfiction where the foundation of their story is built on verbatim paragraphs on paragraphs from the books? I try not to skip the authors' notes because they can be important. But whinging ones like those make me heavily reconsider.

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Oh screw off Sam. He's such a crap alpha. Can't even tell he isn't giving them enough time to sleep or anything.

I would love to download both stories in pdf (they are not available anymore)
I don't know if it would be possible, but I absolutely loved how you wrote everything. I cannot explain, I'm a graphic designer, so I can communicate really well visually, but my texts are mediocre. While reading your notes, I think for the first time I could grasp what it is like to create in the form of text. I don't know, is kinda crazy and I think a very artsy thing, but I would hate to lose those stories and would like to save them in my cloud, to always have.

Just amazing

Not me totally rereading this book…Oh wait I am.
I love this book and hope someone writes more like this.

Thanks for this. It was a great read

This chapter is so wholesome omg. The juxtaposition between the Cullens and the wolves is so perfect

I am completely OBSESSED with this fan fic. I cannot thank you enough for writing this.. like seriously. This is canon to me now. Your writing is fantastic. Just all of it I’m still in awe. I stayed up till 4am finishing it, I genuinely could not stop. I don’t know if you’re even still active or if you read comments but THANK YOU. I’m going through a really hard time in life and I have been looking forward to reading your bella x Jacob fanfics. They literally get me through the day. Thank you thank you THANK YOU! I will read anything jxb you ever make.

friend! I adored this story! any chance you'll cross post it to AO3 at some point?

LOL such a good story and the Auther notes cracked me up!