Is it wrong that I loved this fic?

I know I'm like, twelve years late to this party, but I must comment here and say it was a delightful read. I saw how much you struggled during the author notes and know you have my deepest thanks for writing and uploading this fic. Really, you do. I really liked it, and I think you should be proud of it.

And as someone who, unpopular opinion ahead, likes Meyer-esque writing style, I should also say I really liked it.

Great job!

PS: If you have the soundtrack for this fic somewhere as a playlist, could you link it? Thnks!

Ok. Let me tell you how this book LITERALLY saved me.
So, a couple days ago, I decided I should finally read the twilight series. I'd seen the movies plenty before, but I'd never experienced Meyer's...difficult writing. I was in the middle of 'Eclipse' when I broke down. I was so angry at Bella's stupidity, Edward's controlling actions, the bad writing etc etc. It seemed the only thing Bella did was trip, cook, make googly eyes at Edward, hurt Jacob, and overall be a delusional ditz with no self-confidence. I was completely fed up, and i knew from the movies it didn't get any better. I have a long list of reasons why Jacob should be the one she ends up with.
I decided to banish the canon series from my thoughts and bookshelf, and searched the webs for a good Jacob x Bella fanfic. Now, I'm sorry to admit that I've only dipped my toe in the fanfic universe, which basically means I've only been on Wattpad. I skimmed through A LOT of bad grammar crap stories, until a Reddit alert recommended this fic. And it was amazing, though written in Meyer-style. exactly what I needed and wanted. Thanks!

Like this!

Charlie can't be against bella seeing anyone lol not when that is what made her depressed sorry this a dumb take on charlie

Omg I almost had a heart attack thinking THAT was the end of the series but then I got to chap 20 and you wrote a sequel! Brb on my way to read that
Btw this was awesome, what a good fic. I never really enjoy Bella/Jacob fics but this is just too good

What an interesting take-away! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, even if I too had my gripes about Meyer's prose. On the sliding scale of 'proper' though, I'm more screenwriter than classical literature. I enjoyed the story; I enjoyed the adult approach to relationships—which I felt Meyer's stories lacked. I also felt Edward was much more chilling at the end.

I also think it's an interesting writer challenge. I always feel like I become more like the writer I'm copying.

Excellent writer here

Really great job. I love this. Can’t wait to read more of your work. Truly great job

this was so incredible! The action! The suspense! The longing! 10/10 would recommend

LMAO
I love your sanity updates as much as your story.
It seems we have the same thoughts and conclusions of
SM and how she writes.
You're brilliant.
LOL

thats the end? Where exactly was the conclusion to all of this?

Lol didnt you wrote a sequal tho

I honestly don't understand how someone can keep up steady complaints about Meyer's work while also copying and pasting her work word for word. If the author didn't like the writing of Twilight in the first place, then why write a fanfiction where the foundation of their story is built on verbatim paragraphs on paragraphs from the books? I try not to skip the authors' notes because they can be important. But whinging ones like those make me heavily reconsider.

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Oh screw off Sam. He's such a crap alpha. Can't even tell he isn't giving them enough time to sleep or anything.