Wonderful story
It really changed my mind about Jacob's perspective and now I think as if a whole truth has been revealed in front of me
Thanks for the renovated plot

I know this is very late but I just wanted to know that I like it very, very much! I think the fanfic is amazing! I do wish you would write another one that continues from this one... but I know it's not likely to happen. 10/10

Interesting story, not that bad.

The reason their stories are not delved into is because they weren't important the tribe and it's members were a means to end. Hell originally Jake was supposed to die.

Loved this story! I hope you get inspired to write a sequal! Blew me away :D

Long time since this story was written, but during the cold October month, I felt that Twilight was the right thing to read or watch the movies while I'm stuck at home with a cold. However, I've always had this kind of hate/love towards the Twilight series. Stephanie comes up with this amazing idea but totally blows it and just ruined the whole series in my opinion. Edward always gave me a creepy sort of feeling. I always felt that it was kind of gross that he actually was an old man but didn't age so it was okay to be in a relationship with him. I preferred Jacob who felt more real and honest and he suited way better together with Bella. Therefore I just absolutely loved how you rewrote Stephanie's horrible Twilight series into this amazing story. I read everything in one day! I like how you made Bella way cooler here than what she was in the books and movies and you really made me love the characters Emily, Paul, Sam etc! Amazing job :)

Just wanna write this out before it happens, but I'll figure out a way to set the fanfiction website on fire if Bella gets back with Edward. She's way too cool for him now.

OMFG you read my mind. All of the interesting stuff she totally dropped. *Groan* Oh, SM, your story had such potential...

I think you'd really get into RP, like, writing a story as a character with other people writing the other characters. Certainly if you can write as SM you can write as anyone. :)

Still, good story. I can't wait for Jacob to tell Bella about the imprint, and whatever else. Him not wanting to tell her is perfect though. I mean, who could? Also, I have to say, your version of Bella is my favorite. You've managed to add strength to a character who has a most defining characteristic of self doubt. Bravo!

Hope I'm not annoying you with reviews... Gonna do them anyway.

I know it's super late, and you've already posted all of this, but you can do it!

Okay, maybe not. No offense or anything, but SM is... well her writing is unique. No... That's not the right word... I'll get back to you.

OMG your Sanity Updates are half of the reason I am reading this, dear lord, I understand.

The problem with Twilight wasn't the base premise, in fact, the entire werewolf concept was surprisingly creative and could have become something fantastic in and of itself. It was the writing quality that ruined it, and of course the creepy stalking 100 year old vampire dating a teenage girl with no self value.

My question, of course, is WHY. Why write all of this if you so clearly hate writing in the style of SM? You could have written it differently, or not at all. I'm not upset or anything, just confused. I know I read Twilight fanfiction because I believe in the potential of some of the base ideas.

Anyway, good story, very enjoyable.

PS- Not logged in because I read way too much ffn at work, but my username is HelloBeautifulChild. You'll know it's my account because I've got two Jily fics and a decent post-war HP fic as well.

I really love how you aren't making them fall in love the second she realizes that she is his imprint.

XD Awesome! I felt bad for Edward though, some part of me always shots for the underdog but then I thought 'Hey, he gets her in canon. Jake deserves this.' And bam! Sympathy disappears. Great job on this fanfic!

DAMMIT! DX Author whyyyyy?! I decided to take a random leap of faith for a Twilight fanfic, I hoped I would read one and then cringe and leave but NO! This... This is great! I guess I just have to sell my soul to another fandom -.-'

3 You've done a great job with this, I can't wait to finish and then read the sequel~~~

Great story.