Reviews for The Movement of the Earth
rrochelle465 chapter 15 . 4/20/2016
Very good chapter I hope those two find a common ground or just go very slow...
rrochelle465 chapter 14 . 4/20/2016
Yay glad you are feeling better...Yay glad that bells is wake hmmm what will happen now?
rrochelle465 chapter 13 . 4/20/2016
Fist off i am sorry you're not feeling well...hmmm bella made an intense choice I hope it worked...
rrochelle465 chapter 12 . 4/20/2016
May I suggest. An 10-30min mini break ... I hope Jake get Victoria... I hope Sam Paul Leah and Seth will be okay...
rrochelle465 chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
I think the Cullens was her main characters... I hope Sam is ok and bell can figure out imprinting...
rrochelle465 chapter 10 . 4/20/2016
Thanks for the quick update and change in rating...hmmm what is Jake trying to tell bells?
rrochelle465 chapter 9 . 4/19/2016
Awww you poor thing may I suggest that you and your hubby take a mini vacation after you finish this story... Hmmm poor bella is losing it I hope she find some balance soon what I mean by this is she is torn between what should be done as a posed to what she wants to do...
rrochelle465 chapter 8 . 4/19/2016
Yay I am glad that your on your own to write what you want I can't wait to read it I know it will be great...hmmm bella is doing a a lot of soul searching I wonder if she Will give the imprint a go?
rrochelle465 chapter 7 . 4/18/2016
Thanks for the heads. Up. I know it will be good... Hmmm how will Jake fight the imprint?
rrochelle465 chapter 6 . 4/18/2016
No worries they got to emily...hmmm why is Jake having a hard time telling bella things...
rrochelle465 chapter 5 . 4/18/2016
Hmmm you may be right about that bella is all herself most of the time, but it still makes a great story... I hope after the guys let of some steam Jake will tell Bella everything...
rrochelle465 chapter 4 . 4/18/2016
First off Meyer has a certain goal in mind when writing this story ,so take heart you are doing a great job it's intense interesting and funny so you are doing your job... Poor Sam when it comes to baby alpha he really do need to do better that Jake is very smart for 16...
rrochelle465 chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
Wow what an interesting conversation bells had with Sam I Jake is at the beach and ready to talk...
rrochelle465 chapter 2 . 4/18/2016
Wow bella have a lot of issues. To fix...hmmm what happen to jake that made him call Sam?
Guest chapter 8 . 4/18/2016
Bella could never feel "that" again? Abused? Weak? Unintelligent? Unattractive? Those feelings? BTW Sense & Sensibility does not really apply. Bella has much deeper feelings than those described.
Bella refuses to acknowledge them and attempts to deceive herself certainly. Those feeling are obstacles to the prize. When we ...well I anyway "hear" Bella describe her "love" for a reanimated dead body that she knew only for a few months and knew next to nothing about as well as the way she threw herself into the pain of Eddie leaving ca not help but wonder if mental instability runs in the family. I kind of wish it where otherwise but I cant root for Bella. Her and Eddie deserve each other and thats not meant as a good thing. Bella was empty and dead inside before she ran into Sparkles.
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