This is a brilliant rendition. Never KNEW HOW Bella and Edward thought that was love, it was seriously creepy. And though I love the thought of imprinting, I think you just about right. haha. I like soulmates theory. xP Anyway, I LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending, cliffie, but when are stories not cliffie. haha

And I love JACOB. So here's to you and your skills. (TWILIGHT had an interesting plot but MEYER was such a DRY writer, I personally find The Host a better story. xD) AGAIN, you are !

Ever Reading
Jari

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Never once in my YEARS on FF have Iread a story SO close to Meyer's actual writing style. Please, don't take offense! For I know how you feel about that! But this is a compliment, for you never strayed from original charters and you kept everything as it WOULD have played out had these events "actually" unraveled in Twilight. I am still completely in awe. Also, have you know that it is 8:11am! I didn't SLEEP because I stayed up ALL night reading your story! I haven't done that in a LONG time. You're writing inspires and depresses me. It is truely an honor to read or writing... But now I feel hopeless towards my own literary future. Oh well! I will never regret reading your story!

I must say... I was excitingly angry with you. The way that you just ended it there and weren't going to sequel it... Well I just about had a heartattack! Thank you Sam nd your healing powers! I will get to the sequel as soon as I can!

Once again, haha, truely excellent writing on your part! Never stop writing! Loved it!

Just going to say...this is exactly what you intended it to be, at least in one respect. The first couple of Twilight books are a bit of a guilty pleasure of mine. We have an interesting love/hate thing. And this...this is the ending that the book should have had. This was supremely satisfying somehow. It completed something for me. It's bril and thanks for writing it. I need to run off and look at the sequel now, but...just...thanks.

Your sanity updates are hilarious! I love this story BTW.

I love this! Its way better than twilight! You have so much talent! Have you written any novels? Seriously, I don't even know you, and yet I now want to read everything you've ever written! PLEASE email me sometime, if you need a beta, or just want to give me some tips. I really like to write, but can never manage to finish a story... I find it oddly depressing. Anyway, have a great day, and keep writing! I honestly enjoy your work!

If you ever wish to contact me (Which you probably won't... *sigh*) please feel free to email me at or

Thanks for the lovely writing,
Katie

Ok so I loved it. I literally read it in one day (I know, I know... I have no life) but I nearly passed out when I read a sequel was posted. I am at this moment about to start reading it even though it is nearly midnight and I have to be to work at 7 a.m. also I loved the disclaimers.

The Red Wings are a great team to bad they didn't make it this year though.

This. Was. Brilliant.
You definitely blew that pile of sh*t Stephanie wrote completely away with this. This makes sense. The actual series does not.
Bravo! I am definitely looking forward to the sequel now! :D

I have to admit I started reading this Because of the reviews of your author notes. Author notes are great and the story is great. On to chapter 2.

I really can't decide what I love more, your writing or your authors notes. I lietrally laughed out loud at your last one. I also love the story so far!

This is the first Twilight fanfiction I've read so far and I really enjoyed it! It is very well written!

I LIKE

Thank you for putting so much time and effort into creating such a good story

don't worry, this story is amazing, and i really admire that you are trying to fix the original - and it's working. and love the matrix reference :)

Leave charlie out of this chapter hes annoying and god damn protective