Reviews for The Movement of the Earth |
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Jill chapter 6 . 2/20/2022 I’m really enjoying your story but your superiority Complex over Stephanie Meyer is aggravating. |
JB4Ever chapter 6 . 2/16/2022 I love your sanity updates, they're hilarious. I have had the same thoughts of SM writings. Loving this story so far, thank you. :) |
katieemma chapter 15 . 1/15/2022 \ \ \]] \ |
aHUGEjacobFan chapter 3 . 1/9/2022 this was absolutely amazing. honestly, wayyyy better than anything Steph ever wrote. also, the fact that jacob imprints on Bella makes a million times more sense. why would he ever choose renesmee? some of the portions of the twilight series are absolutely absurd, and would never ever make sense. well thanks anyway, I've thoroughly enjoyed myself thus far |
SummerStruck chapter 17 . 12/11/2021 BEST JACOB AND BELLA FIC EVER THANK YOU FOR THIS! |
Myrrhee chapter 1 . 8/6/2021 I think you absolutely, positively nailed it. I was barely a teenager when Twilight came out, BUT I hated it with the passion of a thousand burning suns. I managed to muddle through it just so nobody would accuse me of knocking it without trying it, then barely made it past the ageist dream that makes up the prologue of New Moon and never tried it again. My first essay in college was about the horrors of Twilight. Inexplicably, I liked parts of it enough to keep reading fanfic about it on occasion. And I'm so glad I did, because I ran into this. This was incredible in its conviction to fix Twilight. I loved the characterization, I loved how Bella *flourished* in healthier company, I loved that she grows into Buffy here. I loved that the creepy imprinting thing was dealt with, and I loved (HOLLERED at) the sanity reports. I love this. I may go back and properly review each chapter during a reread, but right now I'm way too floored to articulate. For now, I say: I liked this story so much I dared to go fetch someone's copy of Twilight, then New Moon, and attempted to read them in order to properly enjoy the story. Alas, if I failed as a teen, I crashed and burned as an adult. Truly, how you read that mess, then somehow unmessed it while mimicking the mess, is miraculous. |
akonikum chapter 17 . 8/2/2021 this is the first bella/jacob fic i have ever read. it is also pretty much the first ever twilight fic i have read, since i wasn't that big of a fan of the series. however - had this been the actual new moon book, i not only would have had much, much healthier expectations about relationships as a pre-teen, but i also would have no doubt been a huge "twihard". this is all to say that i really enjoyed your story (i would list my favourite bits, but there are way too many) and proceeded to read it basically in one sitting. thank you! |
djcarnation chapter 5 . 7/17/2021 i absolutly love your writing .i would love to meet u in person it would b cool to know you ilove your perception of stepnaie less than coherant writing in right on the mark bring some light where their wasnt any for awhile thank you i hope youll be writing for a long time to come |
MxSith chapter 21 . 6/13/2021 I can't stress this enough but THIS IS THE BEST TWILIGHT BELLA/JACOB FIC EVER! I'm so sorry you had to suffer by writing Meyer-voice, the bits you put, the character development we got.. gosh, for the time I was reading this I had totally forgotten about the real Twilight and I wish this were the canon, thanks so much for destroying our sanity in this experiment, I'm forever grateful for this fic |
alwaysbeingme17 chapter 13 . 5/15/2021 I looooove that Bella was the one to kill her! Amazing chapter! |
GoddessNamedFred chapter 17 . 5/8/2021 I think it’s fantastic that the best twilight fic I’ve ever read was by someone who doesn’t even like twilight all that muchthanks for making the story a million times better |
Jellybean138 chapter 21 . 4/23/2021 There are very few fics (or books for that matter) that I deeply and truly enjoy and this one just made my list. I can honestly say that in 10 years when I go through another Twilight renaissance that I will still remember this fic. Thank you for writing this despite how much of a toll it took on you, it is truly appreciated. |
cl chapter 1 . 4/10/2021 Thanks so much for writing this! Much appreciated for this alternative New Moon ending! I like the idea of Jacob imprinting on Bella. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7/2021 I am loving this so far omg. Also, thank you for doing Gods work by rereading smeyers book and editing it like this ️ I know it must be hard but it’s very very much so appreciated |
Leigh Rice chapter 12 . 3/31/2021 Me: "Well, damn." Me: "that's all I've to got to say," everyone else: ... Me: Twilight fanfiction Everyone else: Yep BY THE WAY... This was absolutely spectacular, perfect length, and kept me going. I love it! |