I loveeee *your* world building on top of the previous world "building" (sketching) in the original series :) ugh so great. Love this.

I commend your effort to rework the original text lol. I can't believe we all thought it was soooo good back then! But the stories it's spawned? Woo!

Dreams do come true *happy face*

Sorry about your finger (!) but yay about the sequel

Edward is such a stalker. One of the most toxic relationships in fiction

The moments with Charlie... the moments with Jacob...
This was just the sweetest thing ever!

PRICELESS!
Your Embry is just pure joy to read.

Ps. I feel so sorry about Charlie. This poor man is trying his best but it's just to much for him.

Wow! What even was this chapter!
I loved the action and the suspense (sorry Jacob). I also was a big fan of how you made Bella the hero of her own story in the end. She was not perfect but she came up and executed the crazy plan.

HOLY SHIIIIIIIITTTT

Am I here for Jacob and Bella? Yes, I am
but girl, I'm living for you end notes

Why isn’t the story continuing!? I love it it’s amazing please keep going

Such a great story! thanks for writing it 3

Gajhjhhhhhh instead of epilogue this should be called ‘Edward that M*therf*cker’. I love that you’re totally right. You don’t have to change a damn thing. Boy’s creep AF. Tbh I’m so behind. My nine year old self wasn’t allowed to have anything to do with Twilight because my dad was strict and religious, but I knew the basics of the plot. Even then my ass was not about that sparkly dead person life. Like literally why. Ive finally started watching the films (out of order because I can only be bothered to do it when they come on TV) but ironically I appreciated New Moon the most, since Edward was barely in it. I had some Bella/Jacob regrets so I searched fics and found yours first. Congrats, it was a banger. I enjoyed your identity crises and odd similarity to the original novels without actually being a boring waste of my time. Loved the path you took with the wolves; that was infinitely more palatable than the uninteresting bloodsucking elitists.. and come on, if you could have a beefcake like Jacob, who isn’t an emotionally twisted f*cker, why would you pick the pasty emo. Idk. On top of that, I perused your profile, we ship pretty much all the same things. Basically the same human being. Will be glad to reading your work.

Wow, so I am actually impressed how you were able to write in Meyers voice, like it actually felt like I was reading the twilight series and all. Theres a kind of guilty pleasure reading her writing, it’s so bad but it’s also weirdly addicting but also so frustrating because there’s so many ways it could be better. I enjoyed reading this because I liked how you really made it feel natural while also making Bella more of a person and also explaining her weird obsession with vampires (the whole predator thing!). I’m sorry about your hand, but I honestly really enjoyed this fanfiction and I’m going to go read the sequel now. Thanks for writing it!

I immensely enjoyed reading this and even more thrilled I now have a sequel to read. Idk why, but can’t get enough of Bella/Jacob rewrites around New Moon. Yours is realistic in its plot and the Author's Notes were entertaining to read. Thanks for writing this and sharing!