Reviews for The Movement of the Earth
Guest chapter 16 . 12/28/2019
Oh my god... the end... it's been an amazing time. I've said it before, I'll say it again: I love this fic. And I love the ending. And I love your disclaimers and sanity updates. This was so much fun to read, and I have to admit, it's a little hard to say goodbye. But... I have to. So, goodbye, fic. Let's hope I don't think about you for more than a week straight. Although, that's not really something I can promise.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/28/2019
YEEEEEESSSS. My babies! Together at last! This was definitely worth the wait. I'm so sad that it's almost over. I loved this fic so much. But I can always daydream about Bella and Jacob's future 24/7, like what I already do.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/28/2019
Oh my god, more chaos! That whole explanation was brilliant. I love Embry. Also, fine time for Alice to show up.

"Ooh, french fries." Again, I love Embry. That was perfect. And it feels like we're getting to the end. Which is sad. I mean, if you couldn't already tell from my commenting on every chapter, I love this fanfic. I am religiously Team Jacob, so this was already a dream come true, but then! You had to write it well, too. This slow burn is taking way longer than Victoria's burn, but as long as I get more chapters, I don't mind. And did I mention how much I love that Bella killed Victoria? You go, vampire slayer.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2019
OooooOOoOooh! Exciting! I love that Bella was the one to kill Victoria, and I love this fic. Let's keep on reading!
Guest chapter 12 . 12/28/2019
This chapter is one of the best chapters! How did you even do it? All this chaos and madness, Paul phasing in and out, Sam bleeding, Emily freaking out, Bella running back and forth all over the place... you made Harry's heart attack happen NOW? In THIS chapter? That's cruel. And awesome. Oh god, this was a trip.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/28/2019
Thanks for giving us lots of Bella and Emily moments. There's something about the "wolf girls" that makes their friendship different. Especially at the end- ! Bella trying to help Emily and then needing help too!? This is the good stuff. I'm gonna keep reading.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/28/2019
I can barely type this chapter because I just can't wait to read the next one! This is quality angst.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/28/2019
The chapter was great, of course. I've just been baking too, so I can relate to the whole stress-relieving thing. Hard to focus on your worries when you're focusing on when to stop whipping the cream.

And ugh... the imprint thing! This slow burn is burning me. But it's absolutely delicious, too. I can't wait to see how they get together. I can't wait to see whatever happens next here, actually!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/24/2019
It just keeps getting better and better, doesn't it? We got to see Emily again! :) :) And she sort of bonded with Bella! I've always loved the idea of Bella hanging out with the wolf girls, because maybe she would want to spend some time with humans again, but it would definitely be annoying to have to keep secrets all the time around humans. So she gets the best of both worlds. Even better, since Emily is (usually) a lovely person. :D
Guest chapter 7 . 12/24/2019
Oh god, it's getting even better! I love how complicated this is. The whole imprint thing... and Edward... and Victoria... it was so much simpler in the books, but this is even better. How is anyone supposed to figure out their feelings when everything is crazy? Love it.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/24/2019
The note at the end was so funny. And also, I loved the chapter. I like how you're making this fic similar to the book, but not exactly the same. Also... n. I got so hungry reading this.
Child of Dreams chapter 5 . 11/23/2019
Hey, I like the Left Behind series...
Guest chapter 12 . 10/14/2019
Hijo de la luna es de Mecano
Jaime Volterra chapter 6 . 9/24/2019
Legit, I am in love with your writing and your jokes and your commentary at the end of every chapter. Never in my life have I laughed and cried so much. You’re amazing!
ZappyZappy chapter 2 . 8/21/2019
Only on chapter 2...but damn, I am loving this so much. It's twilight but actually good. Your rants about the source material are amazing.
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