Reviews for Idiocy and Treaties
newmaddy chapter 5 . 3/6/2013
Update please, it is a great story and definetly deserves more reviews. So pleeeaaaasssseeee update
Anon chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Haha, Hashirama is so whipped!
Anon chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Overall, this chappie's pretty good, but there are some flow issues between between scenes. I am looking forward to more!
angelvan105 chapter 4 . 8/24/2011
Wow what a interesting and some funny family moment story it is! Aww! Senju sister Tamako she is so sweet and kind and such caring person she is! also I think Izuna and Tamako make good couple! Hmm.. Uchiha sister Mikazuki she can be stubborn and childish but in way she show how much independent and strong willed she is! also she can be very funny and interesting to be with! I think Mikazuki and Hikaku would be a interesting couple! since only Hikaku can handle her temper which is rather cute of her! ) will keep it up! I can wait for next chapter to come! I look forward by their marriage! great job!

PS May I ask you a question if you do not mind? Sometime Madara get annoyed by her sister Mikazuki but deep down he worry and care for her right? and same thing to his brother or I can wait the story to explain to me!.
wisdom-jewel chapter 3 . 3/3/2011
Oh boy this could go horrible wrong
wisdom-jewel chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
Oh boy I want to know what Haishirama wants to tell them
Wilhelmina Silver chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Oh! Whoops. Never mind. On second reading of the summary, I finally figured that Hashirama was probably the one talking about Tobirama and Madara's sister being married and how he thought that Izuna would marry his sister! Wow, I can't believe I misread that. But, then again, we're all human. Although, now that I read the chapter the fourth time around, I hope that Madara's sister will prove to Madara that she is quite capable on the battlefield. She's certainly capable enough when it comes to predicting Tamako's actions (for example, predicting that Tamako probably wouldn't tell Hashirama about taking down four Uchihas). Although, if she did, Madara would probably ignore it. He comes off as stubborn, hard-headed, and pig-headed that way.

Anyway, please update soon!
Wilhelmina Silver chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Interesting plot. I wonder how this plays out. So, is it going to be a Tobirama/Mikazuki and an Izuna/Tamako pairings? Or is it going to be Hashirama/Mikazuki and Madara/Tamako? Because, from what I can tell in the first chapter, it seemed like Madara might be interested in the Senju sister in the near future. At least, in other stories, it seems like the guy who easily dismisses the girl without actually meeting her tends to fall for the girl after he's actually met her. And then, there's also Mikazuki's attraction to Tobirama. Although, it could be that she has an instant crush on the guy but will eventually fall for the older brother. (Kind of like that Audrey Hepburn movie, Sabrina.)

Anywho, this is interesting, but there were a couple of grammatical mistakes. And, if you're going to make scene changes or switch perspectives, can you put those line breaks to make it look like there is a shift in perspective? You don't necessarily have to point out the obvious by saying "XXXX's pov." Just use the horizontal line icon to make a horizontal line and I think people will know that there is either a time lapse or a change in point of view. (If I'm not making sense, consult Lady Phoenix Grey's fanfiction, Jiraiya's Apprentice, Chapter 2 to see what I mean. There are a couple of line breaks...scene changes...or whatever the heck it's called.)

Anyway, other than that, it's all good. Sorry if I seem to be nitpicky. But, please update soon!
wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Oh Madara and his flawed logic that Senju aren't as attractive as Uchiha men
Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
This is awesome, please update soon :D