Reviews for Utter Silence
nayin17 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
oh wow!
nayin chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Wow! A great way to celebrate being alone hahahahaha
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
nice story
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
I'm not really sure why you chose to use quotation marks instead of apostrophes. It was a little distracting. The same thing with the brackets.
D chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Your story rocked :)
mindy.18 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Good story
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I liked your nice & steamy story, but would have liked it more if not for all the spelling errors. Please take a bit more time to check it over, and be careful with spelling certain words that are similar...quite vs. quiet, its vs. it's (it's is only to be used for 'it is'), sole vs. soul, to name a few...and a few extra or missing words. Thanks for writing!
anj chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Plot & word choice were great, but several spelling errors. I would suggest either laying aside the story for a few days and then checking it for spelling errors or looking for a beta.