Reviews for Craving
mrs.addiecullen chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Hehehe hahahahahaha
Ayshen chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
"What has gotten into you?"

"Nothing, yet."

Right about there I died.

Came back to life and then this happened:

"Cum for me, baby,"

And I placed my head on my desk and prayed because I am going to hell.

Hot, and hilarious, and really, really hot. The quips, the banter, everything. :sighs:
Bex chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Damn how many kids is that man gonna have? Lmbo, i love this story, its cute AND hott!
Collette Daniela chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
ellllliot. i need you. i'm not pregnant but you can have my baby
Lauren Puddingcupsandlollipops chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Birthday or Cake
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Absolutely perfect!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
awww! that is so cute! what a great job!
Keyra Earth chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That is fantasic!

I love that story

It is so... steamy?

I don't know, but I wish I was Olivia right about now... Elliot rocks!

I give you a one word one shot challenge



Excellent Writing as always!
ben.stasvu4ever chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Lol, haha. This was interesting:) umm how about magic, or temptation, thrill, challenge, ecstacy or ketchup! Haha
heidimillett3 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I liked this one.

Is there going to be more chapters?

They are my favorite couple..
AliasCSINYFriendsER chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
LOL! Loved every little bit of this, from beginning to end! The drive-thru kid was hilarious to me...maybe because I'm exhausted from some stupid reason. hahaha

But now I have a craving that Elliot needs to satisfy too. :-p


~mandi *_*
eatmypinkpeach chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Oh God in Heaven! Elliot! Come over to my house to satisfy my craving. Damn it. I'm getting all worked up over him! WHY IS HE SOOOOOO IRRESISTABLE! *frustrated grunt and stares at syrup in fridge* Hmmm... *stares at Christopher Meloni's address* :)
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
omg, loved it! one word fantasy
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I am now a puddle of incoherent thoughts thanks to this numminess! It was incredibly written!
benslerfan08 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Great one shot. Now for my one word request, I was thinking maybe 'wrestling'.
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