Reviews for Betrayal and Forgiveness
elfdemon05 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I would like to see the second part.

I am a bit sad about Tom being a squib, though I wounder if Tom would be paired up with anyone. I really don't want to see Tom being paired up with other.
Sheireen chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I will try to put it nicely: If you don't want to die a horrible and painful death you better put your ass for the next computer and start writting the next part of this story.



Pretty please?

Serious, it would be a shame to not write a second part to this story. You have a great writing style and I myself really, really want to know how the Weasles-trio would react to a alive and super-pissed-at-them Harry.
Anakha Lake chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Please, please, please, please do a second part, that last line is killing me!

Keep writing. (:

Laura-Ann xxx (:
NBKitty chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Wow...I really loved this story. I would love to read another chapter. I for sure want to see how their relationship goes, and I certainly would not mind a little Weasley bashing ;) Continue please!
SomebodyToLove chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I really want to read more of this! It was really interesting and I loved the whole Tom thing. If it is continued, perhaps you could go a little more into the whys of Draco wanting to find Harry. I get that he was interested in him or something, but perhaps you could explain more of why he was interested. I mean, he didn't just wake up one day and think "I want Harry Potter despite our seven years of rivalry." Was there a specific event? Anyways, I really would love to read more! I loved loved LOVED it!
Snuggalette chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
i want to see this continued
Zanthia2 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
The suspenseful ending of that is just begging for a second part to be written, hope you do continue it :)
Umher chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Okay I'm reviewing.

Will you please put up a second part? Its a good concept!
Moon Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I would love a second part! Please continue
AcadianProud chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Nice twist on the Voldermort/Tom part of the story. It will be interesting to see if anyone recognizes Harry/Orion.
Ventus Princeps chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Very Nice! I'd love to see the second part, but either way, this was great! Thanks for sharing.
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