Reviews for Light in the Dark
Tsukibird chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
wow. looove love loved this. it was very emotional in a way.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Amazing writing *u*
ladyyoghurt chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
This was honestly one of the best oneshot I've ever read. A charcterization!
nothing but blue chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
good job!
V-ChanUzumakiLSSJ chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This was very good. I liked it.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
So much talking,they make each other confuse,but you confused me
Wait a sec,is this a speech of story?you're making things looks like your making a dam long speech
MahoganyMika chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Thanks for sharing this story - and I don't think your characters were did a great job in characterisation!
Cloud Envy Shikamaru chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Very well writen. Nice touch..!
madeyemai chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Asolutely lovely.
ugottalongway2go chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Im not really a NejiTen shipper but the writing in this one-shot was hands-down fantastic. (:
Kuroda Taishi chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
hmm...I'm kind of mixed on this one. The writing was superb as always and the plot had a good idea, but something was just off about it. It kinda felt a little...forced? I'm not sure how else to describe it. I really didn't like how Neji said one line and then was all on top of her. It just rubbed me the wrong way. I also thought it might have been more interesting if they had stayed on top of the mountain instead of going back to her apartment.
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
ZoXon chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Amazing story!I love it :D

Keep up the good work :3
toolazytologin chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
It was one of the best neji-tenten stories Ive read in a long while, very good job.

Youve kept them in character and gave them depth.

The gramar was flawless.

Keep up the good work!
nelliizm chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
You have a way with words. I found it amazing :D
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