Reviews for The Brightest Candle
Adele Willow chapter 5 . 7/28/2011
shes kinda naive (did i spell that right)
Adele Willow chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
i guess she didnt get reaped...
Adele Willow chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
i have a filling shes going to get reaped.. sorry i watch too much criminal minds..
nessieforever21 chapter 7 . 9/26/2010
i love it!. update soon
KyeTamm chapter 7 . 9/10/2010
Nice. I like where this is going. Jacob suddenly arriving at her house was pretty much expected but him being drunk was a bonus. Angela marrying Shawn was also another bonus so then she has to decide which one she wants most.

Keep it up and once again, good job CX
KyeTamm chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Very interesting first chapter. I like the way you typed in what happens in the future then say 'Fifteen years earlier' to rerun the story. Good job. C8
Glyndewar chapter 7 . 9/9/2010
This is really good, although I must admit I've never read All-American Girl. I really like how the character of Angie develops throughout the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
xXx A Little Fall of Rain xXx chapter 7 . 9/7/2010
I'm going to be honest and admit that I've never read the book these characters are take from but it didn't matter because from the first chapter I was engaged - the leading character was likeable and the leaving home plot left a good deal of leeway for the story to take form.

I liked how though Angie and Jason didn't have the typical first date they tried to get to know each other later - though shame on him when he left! I can't help but wonder is there more to his leaving than the letter said?

I wouldn't mind hearing more about her new family - how she met Shawn and why she fell for him etc... or will she leave her new perfect family for her ex?

I hope you update soon as I woudln't mind reading more!

Good job!
Callie Osgood chapter 4 . 9/5/2010
I loved the story. It was heartrending, exciting at some parts and there are hardly any grammar/spelling mistakes. overall it was great.
xoxoxoxoxo chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
it was okay