Reviews for Psychic Daughter
T chapter 52 . 8/24/2012
Son of a bitch, they're getting to him. It could use more action. The last chapter was really good.
T chapter 51 . 8/19/2012
I started reading this almost a year ago and there were 50 pages. I finally reach the end and it's not over. I would have that was enough to finish a story. Anyway, fantastic story. I loved it. It was a bit dry in places, but when there was action it was great. Could you try to add some more action? The love triangle is a little boring. Again, I love it.
Guest chapter 31 . 7/10/2012
I like the gloom and doom. l'm not a sadist, but life isn't sunshine an' lollipops.
The Silent Insomniac chapter 47 . 12/4/2011
I'm definitely reading your updates, don't worry about it too much. I just don't comment often.

But glad to see you got more in store for us. :D And that you haven't given up on the story.

See you next update.
JHawkeye9000 chapter 47 . 10/29/2011
Good story and they will never catch a break will they.
megzarie chapter 47 . 10/12/2011
Ah, yes Eusine... he is going a fun character to read in this fic, i can tell
doggiefan chapter 42 . 8/1/2011
This chapter has a bit of everything!

Ah, romantic tension... I had a feeling it'd show up soon. I hope everyone gets out of this depression soon :(

Oh Arceus, it's HER and that Miltank from HELL (milk drink, attract, milk drink, attract, stomp, flinch *shudder*). I'm doing a Nuzlocke run now of Heartgold, and she's even WORSE. I almost feel bad for you Archer.


Oh yeah, and Suicune? Is there a mini plot brewing here in Johto? Doggiefan thinks so.

Anyways, another lovely chapter. Hope you like my longer review; you don't seem to get a lot, surprisingly.
White Ink Penpal chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
To answer your question, I like your fanfic because it's so realistic and full of action. In fact, when I first read it, I was so surprised it did not have the number of reviews it deserved. Then I realized that it's because your main characters section is empty. It took me a while to find this story, but I don't regret it!

Loved the chapter and the fighting scenes. You're very talented indeed.

Update soon!

doggiefan chapter 41 . 7/18/2011
HOLY #$%&.

Wonderful chapter! Wonderful! But I do have a minor complaint-

I've noticed whenever you do battles, you tend to repeat the attack name over, and over again; you only need to do it once, as most pokemon fans have general knowledge of a pokemon's movepools.

Instead of 'Electrivre finished of Golem with one final Low Kick' it could be 'Electrivire made one more sweep with it's legs, finishing Golem off' (or something like that...)

Honestly though, another great chapter. Overkill, Lance?
dudeguypersondude chapter 38 . 7/7/2011
*Shrugs* it was alright, not one your best though. I like it and will be awaiting the next one. •_•
doggiefan chapter 38 . 7/7/2011
Well this is nice; some character development, Steven has one less problem to haunt him, and- -

Just kidding. That aside, another intresting (fillerish?) chapter.

Update soon! Update soon!
doggiefan chapter 37 . 7/4/2011
Yay! Update!

Hoenn at long last! I definately agree with you that team aqua and magma are underated; not many people have read the manga (shame on them) so they never see the bat-shit-crazy side of our favorite eco-extremists. What a shame...

(*nerd senses tingling (again)* HEY WA8 A MINUTE! PIDOVE AND MEOWTH AREN'T NATIVE TO HOENN! PIDOVE ESPECIALLY SINCE ISSHU (I refuse to call it Unova) IS CAST OF FROM THE REST OF THE REGIONS AND- oh I'm ranting again...)
dudeguypersondude chapter 36 . 6/30/2011
This story should have more reviews. The problem I think is the summary its Not all that good. but the story is great. I hope you don't discontinue it.
xXxSolRazorxXx chapter 23 . 6/24/2011
Lol i liked Volkner cocky and arrogant attitude, your doing a good job with him. :)
xXxSolRazorxXx chapter 22 . 6/24/2011
I really like your story and how you develop your characters, and i like the way you potrayed volkner it makes me lol so much, i was hoping if you could include more Erika/Steven moments. xD
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