Reviews for Broken
Chocochino11 chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
yay!... update soon D
Arwen Lune chapter 3 . 9/9/2010
oh I love it! I've always been curious about that only-hinted-at period of time. I love to read about how you've filled it in :-)
jojo140 chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
This is a really good fic. Can't wait for Parker's :)
Chocochino11 chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
i like this story... please update soon D
jojo140 chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
I think the ending to this chapter was cute. He'd have to sit through one of her performances to see her again. Can't wait for your next update.
Miss Mila chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
I thought that was a good chapter, too. I think I'm looking forward to Parker's chapter most of all.

Suggestions:

-Try having a bit more action in what they're doing. It really seems that they're just sitting around most of the time.

-Try "Nate" instead of "Nathan". The team rarely (if ever) refers to him as "Nathan".

All the best,

Mila
Miss Mila chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I really like the first chapter of this.

I think you have a good beginning here, and I'm interested in how the rest of the fic will play out.

I have to say, the end of this chapter was my favorite ].

Mila
ShiroFlake chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Good beginning !

Please hurry up with next chapter.
themindofmine chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Great start
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
that was great loved it
jojo140 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
This was great. Can't wait for the next one.
Jacky chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
This is so totally great! Will you be writting chptrs about what each of the team members did during their little "vacations"? I'd so very love it if you did.