Reviews for Despicable
ArgentaFerae chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Great StarClan Vincent, you're amazing but...I think even my idiot OC understands why someone would be nice to children...
Even if I don't.
Cause I'm evil.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
lol
Lalala chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I liked this story a lot!

My favorite part was the end :D
WendigoGirl chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Oh my, Vincent. XD I love this, it was hilarious. I especially liked Echo's little twitches, it's nice to see her have emotion. I also love the stuff about the rest of the Nightray family, with Vanessa and Eliot fighting. It's so realistic, I can see it happening in the actual story. And, of course, I love Vincent, he's so insane and crazy and you turned that into humor well
Aquen chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Ah! You wrote it! You wrote it! Yay!

By far this is my favorite story you've written for PH! It's excellent, and no I don't think the comedic timing is off, I really like the way you did the piece.

You definitely used Vincent's outer character do to this but you did it really well, you just stopped the more... evil thoughts flowing through his head from surfacing and used his... uh well weirdness to surface more. I really liked how you wrote it and it was great! You executed this idea wonderfully.

Great job! Awesome work and (Fuuko96 said) instant fav!
tamachon chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Man, you're pretty good at writing Vincent and his POV!

Instant fave!

Keep up the good work~ :3

~fuu