Reviews for Naruto: The difference a kiss can make
Jose19 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
I am interested in the story because Sakura is one of my most hated characters in the Naruto series along with Sasuke but it really isn't her fault at the way she is portrayed because Kishimoto ruined her character from the beginning, and he admitted this in a interview because he said that Hinata is a better heroine than she is but it is far too late to fix the mistake now.
isaireyes25 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
You my good sir/madame are fantastic writer. This story was brilliant. Read all 13 of your chapters. Almost all of your characters remained in character. Their development was plausible and you made the changes in the canon story masterfully. The pacing of the story was a bit weird bit it didn't take away from the story. I assumed you were just trying to get through the parts of the story you didn't change so that you could get to the things that you did and progress the story through that. I loved this story. I don't know if you are still actively writing or if you are even gonna see this but I felt like I needed to express my thoughts about your literary eork
XT3100 chapter 5 . 11/21/2013
Well Gaaraa gained two friends. The whole story seems natural and believable.
sef83 chapter 13 . 8/21/2013
love the story so i am going to beg you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue it soon
GreenNinjettiRanger1992 chapter 13 . 8/2/2013
love it plz continue
Sakura chapter 13 . 7/14/2013
It's really good so far it'd be better if when she sees naruto again he'd be a litle bit taller than her
KyuubifiedNaruto chapter 13 . 7/2/2013
well written story. I liked the fight during sasuke's defection and how you didn't make it easy for him when he took out naruto. cant wait till you update this story again.
Wolfone10 chapter 10 . 5/16/2013
and ANOTHER TERRIBLE IDEA on the thirds part, damn his age is REALLY getting to him he just keeps swinging and missing on those decisions.
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is what SHOULD have happened, if the canon author wasn't such a duck-ass suck up.
dalulzing chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
I usually run from shipped pairings like the plague, but I read this for the plot.
blackmoon124 chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
Hmmm this actually seems like a good end to the story, but I hope you are planning a sequel/ continuing this, and now I'm wondering if shika has figured it out yet since he was probing looking forward to your next update
irnzenmonk chapter 13 . 11/10/2012
good story ne
sef83 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Really like this story. hope you start updating all your stories soon
Silent Bunshin chapter 13 . 10/28/2012
I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for providing a very entertaining narrative!
sortofbored chapter 13 . 10/23/2012
Awesome, Im looking forward to more.
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