Reviews for Agony
celestial bronze chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Not really 'angst' actually. But 'l fav this! ;)
xxxxEPICxxxx chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
awh awsome writing ahahha im going thru all ur stoires your a really good writer I LOVE HOW U MAKE ANNABETH SEEM SO CARING AND GENTEL AT THE SAME TIME I LOVE UR POINT OV VEIW
Stinkyacorn chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Really good, deep! And heyy, maybe add some more details ;)
FunnelCakes chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
i think its about ANY fucking girl, besides Annabeth, who is within A MILE of percy and likes him! and i hate red, wanna kill her w/ my chainsaw then drop her in tartarus, or any other girl like the 1 described up there
TheLightAtTheEndOfTheTunnel chapter 1 . 9/6/2010

You're a very good writer, and I like what you did with this fanfic, but I think you need some kind of background information...It's pretty short, and I keep wondering WHY she feels the agony, is shs dating Percy? Does she love him but he doesn't know?

I think you should add some chapters explaining why she feels the agony...

but like I sad, I think you're great at expressing emotion :P