Reviews for she needs him |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming No, just no. Please put more effort into reviews. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming NO IT'S NOT GOOD! Tragedy will never ever be 'that was good keep the chapters coming' that you read child! Stupid Elredar Skylance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this. I am confused but I love the summary. I see it was posted in 2010 and that was so long ago :( Please continue. I would love to read it. I don't read a lot of FanFics. I write FanFics more than I read them but every so often, I do read a few and this is definitely one I am interested in. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please you can wright more then that! |
![]() ![]() Sounds good! But will be even better with longer and sooner updates:-) ThanX |
![]() ![]() ![]() chapters need to be longer but good start |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is just constructive critisism...it's a very good start just be careful of past/present because sometimes you switched back and forth between them. Some users were also commenting that it was too short...well some chapters can be short, ive read books where there may be one chapter like tht. Like in New Moon (by:stephanie meyer) for instance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but the story has nothing to do with the story. Too short too. Are you going to update? It might make the story better. Good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start. A little short though. Keep it coming please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() like it. but 2 short |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was lame |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like where this is going ) update soon KIMMIE xxx |