|Reviews for A New Runner|
| thewolf74 chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
This is a very good story. Please update again very soon. I want to know what happens next.
| insanekittie19 chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
"He almost didn't want to stop wrestling with her." Lol! I'm sure he likes holding her down, straddling and so forth! lol
Nice second chapter. At least now she thinks they might possibly not hurt her, which is a good thing.
I like how you had her thinking that Ronon couldn't have been a runner because of him being noisy and stuff.
Can't wait for more!
| insanekittie19 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
This looks like it's going to be a pretty good story.
And it's Ronon/John? Mmmm! lol
I kind of laughed when you said the runner was a woman. I didn't see that one coming. And then I laughed again when Sheppard said ""What? Man, all you runners are alike."" Good job putting his sense of humor in here.
I found it a little difficult for my eyes to follow along with the chapter though because there isn't any line breaks between the different "paragraphs." Maybe in the next chapter you can put some in and see if that makes it easier to read!
Great start, I can't wait to see where this goes!