|Reviews for Star Light Star Bright|
| Rapier11 chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
Love it! :)
| WhiteFoxLia chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
Thats not fair at all I mean come on this chapter ends there, I mean seriously. I absolutely loved and its just too interesting not too continue . please update soon.
I honestly hope you finish this story.
| Calanthe1066 chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
Well "Hi" again. Your stories are addictive. ssshh.
Anyway, about the Chars themselves. I'd say they wre pretty good. Though I never actually made it all the way through FF13 so I can't really pin that.
*scratches head* But I still enjoyed your version of Fang. *bites lip* MMnh, anyway.
Is it bad that while reading this, I see lgt and Natsuki? And one of Shiz Fangirls...? Quite an add mix... *laughs* Anyway, as far as technique, I have no comment. It flows nicely.
Going to go peruse the rest of your lovely collection.
| Baka-Strawberry chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
i see that you haven't update this story in a long time..
well, i hope that you will update this because this story is hella interesting XD
looking forward for next chapters! :D
| Krabkrab chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Eeeeew. Fanboy and a fat one to top it off. By the way, HOW exactly does he intend to get Fang back?
| Krabkrab chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Something I left out, Light is a better leader (maybe...) then Fang. Also she's better at magic so all she'd probably need to do is stay out of reach, but then that's not how a spar works. But yes a surprise sucker punch would do it.
| Krabkrab chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
By the way, Lightning's great and all, but when it comes to hand-to-hand, Fang is better...Which includes sword versus lance (her only advantage being the gunblade) and has higher health than Lightning (meaning in the real world she'd be able to take a few more hits than Light).
| ShadowCub chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
| nomask chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
good story! Too bad you havent updated for a long while. I hope you'll consider finishing this.
| Lara Fang chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Hey...nicely done...looking forward to the next chapters
| k chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
great story hope you update soon fang punching the creepy stalker in the gut priceless can't wait for the update
| ALEXISSA2 chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
Damn, Fang wore a suit (and not in just her undies XD). I'd think Fang is more feminine than Light but that's just me.
Ahhh, so there is a Light stalker and it seemed like he's not giving up easily. Both girls better watch their backs, this guy looked mentally unstable.
More soon please and thanks.
| Weiss Rose Schnee chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
Yea a update at last. This chapter was very cute with Fang being very polite to Claire um Lightning. Too bad their dinner date was interrupted by a crazy fanboy stalker and I dont blame Fang for being overprotective of Claire. I dont really know what the stalker ment but i can bet whatever he tries Fang isnt going to let him get away with it. I also like that the two are slowely becoming attracted to each other. And that kiss..totally unexpected. I hope things get even better in the next chapter.
| Aiden Allard chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
ohhh i wonder what's going to happen next~!
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
Well, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!
Now, THIS was interesting!
Fang looked mighty fine! OO
And LOL at the dinner scene. That douche got PWN3D! LOL But I get a feelin' this ain't the last we'll see of him...Hmmm...Damn stalkers. Gotta hate'im. _
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!