|Reviews for Airplanes|
| coffeepot chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Oh, that is such a touching story...just the beginning, how you described the way children deal with their parents-great and you picked it up in the continuum. You gave the characters so much life...especially the relationship between Jake as the Big Brother, Derek was always looking for...great work. Please go on writing it was really a pleasure to read!
Thankk's for sharing.
| valis2 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I'm so sorry-I accidentally left this review on one of your other fanfics. It was meant for this one:
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! There is so little Jake and the Fatman fanfic out there-it's a treasure to find more. And I love Jake h/c, so this was a bonus!
I liked how you invested so much time in putting together a backstory for Derek-it was interesting and I liked how you pulled it all together. And your English is very good! I enjoyed this very much!
(Sorry for the mixup!)