Reviews for Antz: The General's past
IronSpockMaster chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
Great chapter :) i can see mandible becoming the ant he is in the film.
Groudon202 chapter 5 . 9/26/2010
It's okay, I guess, but you're stuck in the "random, unrelated events" thing again. Get it to the character development soon, as we get the characters by now.

And what was that about school bullies giving you a hard time two days ago? You're saying that boys picked on you?
IronSpockMaster chapter 4 . 9/21/2010
I like this chapter. I like how Mandible's character is developing.
IronSpockMaster chapter 3 . 9/11/2010
I like the way you wrote Mandible's lines in this chapter, and the way Rose was so obviously oblivious to how she was making him feel. Keep going, this is awesome :)
IronSpockMaster chapter 2 . 9/9/2010
I liked this, I like Mandible's reaction to the girls.
IronSpockMaster chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I like this, I like the way it's Mandible as a kid, and shows some reasons why he turns out the way he does.

More? Yay