Reviews for Perfect
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
This fanfiction is really amazing, totally one of my favourites (:
I have made fanart of it, if it's not a big problem, hope you like it art/Perfect-513975011?ga_submit_new10%253A1423952117 ;v;
Guest chapter 27 . 3/27/2014
What confused me was how did ryou want that one man? Like sexually
Guest chapter 26 . 3/27/2014
This is amazing thank you so much I've been going through a hard time right now and this fanfic made it all better thank you!
Lina Mistress of Elements chapter 35 . 3/17/2014
I laughed so hard at certain points *like Mariku and Bakura kissing* and my heart broke for Bakura when Ryou said those words to him
Awesome story!
SincerelyChristina chapter 35 . 3/3/2014
THANK YOU! I loved this story. I know it's been awhile since you finished this, but I wanted to tell you how much I loved this story. You have a fantastic style of writing that I haven't seen in awhile.
KaiKappel chapter 23 . 10/8/2013
Malik is PMSing and his pad is getting uncomfortable? (It happens!) I don't know, maybe he just wants to break dance in the middle of class?
KaiKappel chapter 10 . 10/8/2013
Hey! Don't make fun of muffin lovers! We happen to be very happy with our relationships thank you!
Erin-Flight chapter 35 . 8/15/2013
Aww what a wonderful story! I loved it. Thank you!
kanyon01 chapter 35 . 8/6/2013
AHHHH! I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA WHAT YOUR DOING TO ME! IM SITTING HERE FREAKING OUT AND SQUELING AT MY COMPUTER! This is just the perfect story! You are an amazing writer, like seriously! Your writing is awesome! You could easily become a famous author! And this story, it was just perfect! The development of the characters, the backstories, the mental problems! PERFECT! I LOVE IT! THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE THIEFSHIPPING STORIES! along with Domino Institution by and multiple chaptered fics by Jem Kallop. XD This story, was just amazing, perfect, and awesome! It had so many layers, and emotions, and I LOVE THE ENDING! GREAT WORK SERIOUSLY! YOU COULD EASILY BECOME AN AUTHOR! :D
HuntressAtNight chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
35 chapters?! I really am going to die.
sushi4427 chapter 29 . 1/19/2013
When you said there were lyrics, I saw that line and was like "That's probably it." And then I was RIGHT :D Sorry, just a little flash of my feeling really smart XD
anon chapter 35 . 12/26/2012
I just read this story over a few days, and, not being much of a writer, I'm not sure how to express my feelings on this story. The summary looked sort of cheesy, but there were so many reviews, and I needed a way to waste my time during winter break...but it turned out to be so much more awesome than I expected! I loved the chapter about music, and also the rest of the story. It was a pretty well-constructed AU, especially for a high school AU. However, it may be a few days or weeks before I stop thinking of Ryou and Bakura in particular as brothers, and I'm not sure how I feel about that. But, yeah, this is definitely one of the best Yugioh fanfics I've read so far.
G.Vongola.Primo.Generation02 chapter 35 . 11/28/2012
HOLY CRAP YOU ARE A GENIUS AND THAT WAS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL AND YOU REALLY ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER SIMPLY FANTASTIC AND OH GOD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND FEEEEEEELS! THANK YOU YOU WORKED SO HARD ON THIS AND I JUST WANT TO CONGRATULATE YOU ON A JOB VERY WELL DONE YOU AWESOME PERSON YOU! YOU WRITE SO WELL I HOPE YOU BECOME A WRITER ONE DAY, I'D BUY YOUR BOOKS!
YOU. ARE. A. GOD.
D XD :) *freaking out over awesomeness of story*
(Oh btw you really wrote the respective mental illnesses wonderfully, I have schizophrenia and I think you did a great job on Mariku! And a friend of mine has PTSD, it was really written well! (Oh Ryou you poor darling you!) )

Can't wait to read your writing in the future!
PrueHarrison chapter 35 . 11/22/2012
Beautiful story! Nice work, really :) And I've got to say - no character was OOC like in so many other stories I read. 35 chapters in a foreign language - I did it! My English teacher from school should be proud - but I won't tell him, anyways... I will keep this awesome fanfiction all for myself xD
Miss Macabre Grey chapter 35 . 10/22/2012
Deep down I think I've always hated you. You go through all this c*ckteasing, and I STILL don't get a sex scene out of you! I understand this is rated T and all, but WHY? Why not a freakig blow job or SOMETHING. DX EIZNRJNWBCIW
I am totally with Bakura and Mariku on this sex nonsensory. I shall had my revenge upon thee! Smite thee, smite!

Love,
Grey
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