Reviews for Ravel, Unravel
Meri Kaisla chapter 3 . 9/4
What I don't understand in these stories (all of these stories, really) is why some people come back in time and unite with their old bodies (the heroes, usually) while others come back completely separately and exist as doubles (the villains, always). It seems so whimsical... In any case, I just wanted to voice my confusion in this. In any case, I am getting into Itachi-centric stories, and this is a nice addition to my reading list ;)
Shinigami Merchant chapter 5 . 2/12
I really liked this, it gave enough information to give us a vague picture that answers a lot of questions but gives us more as well, sort of like an almost complete puzzle
jcampbellohten chapter 5 . 10/29/2015
Woah, it's going to be one of *those* fics. Looking forward to it, even so, because this time they have Itachi. Based on the opening lines, does that mean Danzou formed Akatsuki and took over the village with their power?
jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 10/29/2015
I'm surprised he took her word for it based on just "He said he was Madara and he had the Sharingan."
matchynishi chapter 5 . 9/24/2015
omg wow. loving each and every drabble though I have to say, the first one with the intel division was my fave. XDDDD There's just something about freaking out desk workers...
narutonarutolove chapter 5 . 9/10/2014
my gosh its so tense...
narutonarutolove chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
im hesitant to believe him truly dead...
narutonarutolove chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
loved how you wrote Kakashi. you Hit his personality (in a good way!) very well. I really liked how you portrayed him.
narutonarutolove chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
-nervously gnaws and finger nails- oh man, I dont know if I want to keep reading!

-scrunches eyes closed, peeks one open- NNNNNNGGGG -clicks 'Next'-
CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 5 . 12/27/2013
thank you for such a well-written fic -each and every chapter packed a punch or was a really interesting glimpse into the world you've built, and i love how much you were able to convey in so few words. thank you for writing, as i enjoyed reading. :)
USClearVeilJP chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
I love this, your story's are amazing! 3
kiyang064 chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
Good stuff. Moving along fast, though.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 5 . 2/28/2013
Danzo. I knew it. The [CENSORED] old fanatic.

...And history repeats itself. Joy. On to Shades!
always-kh chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
ooooh interesting i look forward to all this.
AdamEbe chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
...Buuuuuut I think I might get over the disappointment! :D
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