|Reviews for seesaws|
| LilyLove chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
But most of it is
( you'll hate to hear this one )
That was my favourite line because it just sounded like something Lily would say if she was berating herself:)
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
That's so amazing, it shows exactly how Lily and James work! It's beautifully astounding and slightly sad at the same time. Bravo.
| Corpse Account chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Well, then. Thought I'd review, seeing as I nearly got mauled to death because I didn't before... But, alas, nevermind.
...To the point, this is brilliant!
I love your quirky metaphors in this, something a little different than I've read before- so obviously, how can I not like this? The writing flows very nicely, and it's interesting to read, and fantastic choices of words- you know what I mean! I actually could go on and on about my favourite line, but it has to be (not only to stop you from falling alseep,):
"Life ain't fair, baby girl." Ahh, I was grinning at that.
...The word choice! Not the fact that she's miserable! Sheesh!
Anyway, brilliant, evidently. Keep it up!
| Angel-son of Caesar chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I love this to pieces.
Your work never ceases to fascinate me.
Thank you for this.
Reading this has made me happy more than once.
You are an amazing poet.
Don't forget it.