|Reviews for because finding a perfect guy isn't that easy|
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Ooh. I loved that last sentence :3 Isn't Lorcan just perfectly yummy? xD
I like your portrayal of Dominique on her hunt for the "perfect guy." 'cause you're right, finding him isn't that easy, and I think you wrote this story well incorporating that idea - especially the parts with the guys falling for her cousin/sister.. that would really bite o_o
Great response to the challenge, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing!
| hot chocolate mess chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
That was very cute. I like it very much.
| Screaming Faeries chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Beautiful! This would make a great multi-fic story if you ever took it up as one ;)
| Dream of Many Dreams chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
*grins* I love it! That was great. The last few lines were simply the best. Awesome job!
| xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Aw... I really liked this! It is, first of all, beautifully written. Dominique's POV, speaking of all her relationship- all her crushes. It's real and ordinary- what happens to most girls.
And then, this magical finale where Lorcan understands her trick and uses it against her! So funny and lovely at the same time;)
| Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
That was an interesting story. I liked your characterisation of the children of fairly minor characters, especially Blaise's son - that was a good idea. Your portrayal of Dominique's relationship with Victoire was well done too. I liked this story :) Great job.
| lilylou101 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Aw, I loved it! The ending was so cute! I really liked it, how she fell for another boy over and over again, but they always broke her heart! It was so well written and I loved it!
| beedivine chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Awwww! I love the last two paragraphs, they are adorable! I really like this, and I loved the whole storyline of it. This is pretty well written, and overall, just pure awesome. Great job! ]