Reviews for Unbroken
Jaely chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
ummm I think I stumbled on this story somewhere else... I've no idea where... This story seems so familiar but I can't place my finger on where or if I'd seen it before. If you have this on another site where it continues on I would love to read it. Or might I encourage you to maybe comeback and continue posting here? please? I know it's been some years, but it's a really good story... though I have to say... I'm kind of... ok REALLY hoping Zedd fails... I'm not sure that is what you are going for but that is what I'm hoping for. I adore How Kahlan and Cara are together and I really don't think Zedd has the right to destroy that because it didn't turn out the way HE wanted it too.. I mean hell it was a lot better than the way he left it and those he loved were alive and well. I don't know... it seemed like it is wrong to trying 'kill' them all just because he changed things and it didn't come out the way he liked it. I can understand when it was under Darken Rahl... Things were really bad then.. But Under Kahlan and Cara they are good, why mess with that? I mean, way not go up and tell them what happened in his own time and say, I'm no threat now... I just want to live my life and help you all? I don't know... I just wanted to smack him and tell him that if he didn't want things things to change he shouldn't have done the magic in the first place... Ok done ranting. want to read more hope to find out if I did happen on this story some where else and you can direct me back to it :) Until then :)
calisky3 chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
He could just leave it as is... Love it. They need to stop the wizard!
oftherose13 chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
i just read this im bursting with happiness its like too good to be true !
so will zedd let things be or will he change things to how they were?
does khalan know?
did the other softer khalan die or did the two khalans go back together?
did cara fix the amulet?
argh so much but its a lovely story
would love if you continued
Baley fo life chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
just stumbled along this story and it's fucking AMAZING! one of the best LOTs fics I've ever read. hope you do continue this, it's truly amazing
UnguidedLight chapter 3 . 1/1/2012
Awesome great read :) Xxx
Beguile the Sun chapter 3 . 12/17/2011
This story is such a relief from the others I have been muddling through. It's so easy to get lost in it; it's so good! I've enjoyed it immensely, and look forward to the update. Keep up the great work!
IxHeartxGlee chapter 2 . 11/3/2011
Great chapter. I love little Dahlia and Kari. :)

Thanks for sharing!
IxHeartxGlee chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Holy crap! So good! That was completely unexpected. I loved it. :)

Thanks for sharing!
lilsochin chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
yes, truly a joy to read... I only hope that this one will not be left undone! there are few stories written this well... thank you and i await in anticipation for the next update!
tanama30 chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
wow i totally love this story i can't wait for more plz update soon
McKinna-Amnell chapter 3 . 7/20/2011
Great story. Really engaging. Cannot wait for an update.
McKinna-Amnell chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Loving this so far!
Knight-XIII chapter 3 . 6/26/2011
Zedd is getting on my nerves... he's going to destroy the peace just because he doesn't like that Rhichard isn't with Kahlan. Dumbest reason ever to destroy a persons life over especially since he wasn't in any hurry to correct it the first time he cast the spell.

I hope they are able to stop him before he hurts Cara.

I look forward to the next update.
Knight-XIII chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
wonderful chapter.

I love the children and Kara they are all so sweet.
Knight-XIII chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I thought I had reviewed this story before, but I was sadly mistaken and I am sorry for that because this is an amazing twist to the show. I love it and I cant wait for your next update.
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