Reviews for Smooth Surface
DarthAbby chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
ohhh good one! my heart was pounding and my eyes were as big as apples by the time i finished reading!
SherryGabs chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Very powerful. This had my nerves on edge. LOL. Well done!
yathink1123 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wow! You have got my attention. Ready for more. Great fluid style of writing. Felt like I was in the car with the team !
PT21 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wow, there's gotta be more to this, surely? Pleaaaaaaase!
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Very fast-paced, intense One Shot. I think you nailed Gibbs's perspective, and created a very well-written piece. Nice job! :)