Reviews for If You're Not The One
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 2/16
Cute story. I think I had a sugar overdose, . Thanks.
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 2/16
Such
Motherof8 chapter 4 . 2/16
Emmett is so funny.
Nikie Bleeker chapter 14 . 10/6/2010
I loved this story! You picked really good songs and every single one of them fit really well with the chapter! It really is so good. I love to read what you write. Keep it up! xx
She-Loved-Too-Easily chapter 14 . 10/4/2010
Hey there! :D

Yaaay, there it is, the last chapter. I'm happy that I can read this new chapter, but on the other hand I'm sad because it is the last one. :( Ah well, there'll be other stories, right? Right? Right? *Puppy eyes* :p

Anyway, I would love to be a queen. :D Sounds like a lot of fun. We are the queens of Awesomeville, woohoo! Now let's go and make up silly laws, lol. :p

Okay, enough useless chatter, let's get back to the story. xD

Ah, five years later, an epilogue, I'm really curious how things are going now with our favorite couple.

I like the fact that Bella told Renée about her new life as a vampire. This is, in my opinion, one of Stephenie Meyer's big fails. I think if anyone could handle the truth about vampires, it would be Renée. So great job! :)

Aaahw, love the scene in the meadow, and the diary is such a cute gift. :) And when Edward gives her the CD and they talk about the memories that go with the songs, so sweet! :D

Also like the last song, it perfectly describes how Edward sees Bella. And loooved the fluffy ending! :D

What else can I say, this story rocked! Fluff, happy ending, exactly my kind of story. :D Thanks so much for sharing this awesome story with us, and I truly hope you'll find some time and inspiration to write some more stuff, because I love reading your work!

You rock! Keep up the great work, and see you at another story! :D (And on MSN, doh. xD)

xxx Shirley
Lulutbo chapter 14 . 10/3/2010
Awesome! Thanks for sharing!
Smily08 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Lol Yesterday I had a sleepover and we played sing star and we sang the song If your not the one lol. This sounds like a cute story I can't wait to read more.
She-Loved-Too-Easily chapter 13 . 9/27/2010
Hey there! :D

Yeah, you took your time, but hey, you can't help it that you got sick! :O Are you feeling better? I hope so! And you're right, we really need to discuss Vampire Diaries. xD Why are we always so busy, busy, busy? :p I have to say, this is great timing, now I have some nice fluff to read before I have to go to my boring job. xD

Anyway, new chapter, yay! This is a nice surprise though, I thought that this was going to be the final chapter, because you said thirteen chapters. xD But turns out that there are fourteen now, so that's awesome news. :D *Happy dance*

Okay, wedding night, I'm really curious to see what special twist you added. Don't know the song by the way, but if you picked it, I'm sure the lyrics fit with the story. ;)

*Really going to read now* Your rambling is contagious, you see that? Sigh. :p

Ooh, I like the idea of the surprise-honeymoon. Plus it's so Alice. xD

Woohoo, Crete, that's awesome. :D Go Alice. xD

A striptease? xD Lol, poor, shy little Bella. xD Alright, you weren't kidding when you said that it was a bit out of character, but hey, at least it's original, I like that. :p

Aaahw, and the ending is so sweet. :D I really liked your version of the wedding night! It was just perfect, and sweet and cute. :)

I'm really excited to read the last chapter, but like I said before, take your time. ;) Rushing is never good. xD

You rock, and therefore, I hereby declare you: Queen of Awesomeville! :D You're welcome, lol!

I have to run now, I'm late for work. *sigh* Take care & keep rocking! 8D

x Shirley
Lulutbo chapter 13 . 9/26/2010
I've really enjoyed reading this...was sad to reach the end thus far!
Raven's twimom chapter 13 . 9/26/2010
GREAT CHAPTER! Overall good story! write more soon. glad your feeling better!
Enchanting Lilly chapter 12 . 9/23/2010
Love Love the are really a good writer.I am really liking your story and can't wait for next chapter.

Lilly
Enchanting Lilly chapter 10 . 9/23/2010
That was wonderful so romantic. I love New York to I was born there. I liked your version better then Eclipse. Why to go now if I just could get my husband to ask me again like that. Oh well I guess after 43 years I'm not going to get my wish he said once was enough. I hope he meant that in a good way. Well he is still with 't wait for next chapter.

Lilly
NutzforLUTZ chapter 12 . 9/21/2010
Yum.

I love how you write fluff.
Emma-MasenCullen chapter 12 . 9/21/2010
Great couple of chapter, really fluffy :D :D update as soon as you can :)
She-Loved-Too-Easily chapter 12 . 9/20/2010
Alohaaa! :D

Woohoo, it's wedding time! :D Fluff guaranteed! :D That sounds really good to me. :p

Oh oh! From This Moment On! The Shania Twain song? :O I know that song is ancient and all, but I still love it, and I think it's just PERFECT for a wedding. :D

Omg, Eddie is worrying again. *sigh* Not the husband she deserves? :O If Edward Cullen is not a good husband, then there sure as hell isn't any hope for the rest of us. xD

Haha, Alice's words of wisdom, works every time.;) She truly is a great sister. :)

OMG, gotta love Jasper! "Really Edward? Jasper's thoughts interrupted mine. You're getting married and that's what you're feeling?" Too funny! xD

Aahw, it's so cute that they've chosen to write their own vows.

Aaahw, love the dance and the song! :D

The wedding was really amazing! Fluffy, cute, perfect! I loved it, you've really outdone yourself! :D You're awesome!

Can't wait for the last chapter, take your time to write it, it has to be perfect, just like the rest of the story! :)

xx Shirley
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