Reviews for Mansion of the Beast
UniquelyMeLovesOreos chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
Oh my Oreos I forgot for a long time that it was just a LOOOOONG one shot I thought I was going through chapters. I loved it and it is in my top ten favorite ghost hunt stories.
Precious Power chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
That was officially the longest fanfic I have ever read,45 min !You should write a full book or at least an anime book I would so totally buy it!ANIME RULES ANIME RULES ANIME RULES!I had hoped that they had made more seasons though !*sigh*
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Wow this story is sooooo good it has so much suspence also I loved the Naru and Mai it's a great story
FoxFire 1716 chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
Really awesome! I loved it specially the wolf like powers and the eye that was cool you
Make another for this like on an investigation she uses the power that would be awesome! 3
birdlover101 chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
DawnOfRenalice chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Awww I really liked it! It was definitely different from the other GH FF's I've read and it was interesting! Good Job :))
KittyKatluv chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
3 3 3 all the hearts for you and your awesome story! 3 3 3
Thorin No-Can-Shield chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
wow that was amazing :O i love your way of telling the story :D you should write a sequel! chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
RedestBlood chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
i loved it awesome story ;p
MagicalMagician chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
this is the best ghost hunt story ever! i have read alot of stories and this is the best ever!
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Oh my good gosh this story is amazing! I really liked the whole idea of Mai's powers and her half sister, and the case was so interesting. You really did an amazing job! Can't wait to read more Mai/Naru by you!

DarkDreams55 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
i just have to say that i liked your story! but its bugging me so... when Mai is in the hospital in room 666. um, in japan the 'forbiden number' is 444. and believe it or not but hopitals in japan won't have that room number because of the superstition behind the number. so they skip it. 443 right to 445 no 444 whatsoever! Cool, huh?
muffin chapter 1 . 3/7/2011

One of the great things about your story is that it has a very long and well carried plot. As a story, it was a good and interesting read.

However, since this is a fanfiction, I would like to propose an alternate critique. One of the key features (I feel) a good fanfiction should have is that while it provides a creative interpretation of the original work, it also manages to capture the essence of the original. Now, I have never watched the Ghost Hunt anime so I don't know how things were like there. But, one of the key features of the manga which made it so appealing to me was the very sympathetic portrayal of each and every character.

Even Masako, who is officially Mai's rival, becomes, arguably, her best friend. Ayako, as whiny as she is, turns out to be a very powerful miko (under the right circumstances). Just examples, but that was the appeal for me, as in many shojo mangas, the love rival is villified, which is, quite honestly, unfair to the love rival.

Hence, as much as I enjoyed your story, I quite wish you had managed to capture that essence of general goodwill between all characters. That, of course, is just my opinion, and your story was a decent read.

Hope to hear more from you soon.


TuTsXxX chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Its such a cute story! I will say that Naru isn't true to character...I dont mean that as a bad thing at all! Its actually refreshing to see a different take to his character! Loved it and I can't wait to read more from you in the future... ;)
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