|Reviews for The Apprentice|
| Tricia chapter 21 . 2/24
It has been a while but I love this story and I really want to see where it goes. I hope that you find time to update.
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/24
It's been two years since you updated and this story is much too good to be left alone!
| Saint Snape chapter 21 . 2/20
This is such an excellent story and I don't think I've ready anything quite like it before so it's a huge disappointment you haven't updated in over 2 years. I really hope you finish the story. You have done such an excellent job keep Severus in character and believable.
| AngelWitch chapter 1 . 1/14
I. LOVE. THESE. SORT. OF. FICS! And yeah, I've read Sindie's The Moment it began. Hope you get to 1,000 reviews,
| RavenKing 23 chapter 21 . 1/9
I absolutly love this story, having Snape act like a mature adult in a back in time fic is rare, plus all of his dry wit.
| Allen's Matchmaker chapter 21 . 1/9
And where is that new chapter?
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/6
| Konohamaya Uzumaki chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
damn i wish you'd kept updating! this story was so amazing i haven't been doing anything but read these past few days, i'm like a zombie now
| Vincent chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
Great story so far.
| Vincent chapter 20 . 12/8/2013
Complete overkill and seemingly unnecessary. Why couldn't he just use other methods? Why not alter the curse to make it so that it's not permanent?
| arien043 chapter 21 . 11/25/2013
Great story! Love the characterization. Please do update!
| Soulless Traveler chapter 14 . 11/24/2013
You made me laugh several times. To first dates.
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I've been reading your chapters over and over because they're so brilliant. Severus' awakening into this new world was hilarious - loved how he put James in his place.
Oh, and I JUST noticed that on your profile it says that the Apprentice is part one of three stories?! it makes me elated to know that there are stories after this one XD
| whitealmond chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
Please, they have to go to Puddifoot's. PLEASE have them go to Puddifoot's someday. I need to see Snape's reactions. I know you can do it.
At any rate, I've been reading and rereading the chapters. This story is quite astounding - one of my most favorite Snape/Lily Snape do-over stories. It's a refreshing take on Snape and his plans for Voldemort's demise. I love, love, love how selfless he is in the beginning - to think mainly of disposing of Voldemort, and essentially leaving Lily to Potter in Hogwarts. But she came after him, in the end, which I'm very thankful for.
I like how you write James and Co. too, and especially Snape's interactions with Remus, who is so nice and funny. Snape isn't as hateful and angry at Potter as I'm used to - he's showing a remarkable amount of restraint towards the man he's hated all his life, who married the woman he loved etc etc. I'm glad he got away from them before sixth year, they would have continued harassing him _ though I am enjoying James' turnaround in his attempts to win Lily's favor. He's so terribly awkward.
Anyway, I hope you're well, and that we'll see an update from you one day. One of my favorite fics updated after a two year hiatus, and I myself have let fics go for years before dabbling in them again, so I have hope! Good luck with everything and come back to us when you can, for we love your story
| Margaritasc chapter 21 . 10/21/2013
This sucks, ( not the story, it is incredibly well written and just plain awesome) just the fact that there hasn't been an update in like 2 years! Please don't give up in this story, it the best. Love how everything about it, the characters, plot, and how you describe everything. Please, please ,please update.