Reviews for The Apprentice
RoxPol chapter 21 . 4/23
Six bloody years passed! I hope you are OK and this is just luck of inspiration . This was first fanfic that took my heart 3 years ago. After that I started searching another fanfics with similar plot. Nobody developed such character of Severus Snape like you. He seems so realistic, matured (in his own way, of course, because this is Snape). Very sorry about not able to see how this character will developed further.
IloveHeat chapter 21 . 4/22
I am glad you quit. I loved this story and Snape's little comments. I will always imagine a happy ending and not be faced with pesky visions of a tragic outcome. Thank you for sharing this. It is the first Sev/Lily that I have ever loved
Arrow403683 chapter 21 . 4/19
Good story! Not usually a Snilly fan, but this one seems decidedly natural. Abandoned?
Corwyn chapter 21 . 4/17
I'm loving this story so far, and I hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
George1892 chapter 21 . 4/9
Great story. Shame to see it stop so abruptly.
HoloKasT chapter 21 . 4/5
Loved this story so much, just finished reading it again and so sad that it looks like it will never be finished.
TinyLady chapter 21 . 3/29
What can I say in front of this beautiful, lovely, so wonderful, but sadly unfinished story? I sigh… I'm not really sure about characters' real personality, but here, none of them seems too original- I mean, they are not odd. I love Snape's logic, how he decided to destroy Horcruxes, develops relationships with others, and his feeling and attitude toward Lily. He is 38-year-old man, yet still young in love… This is quite slow-paced story, but that makes it more beautiful. I wanted to finish reading it quickly, but felt so sad when I found I have few chapters remaining… oh. And the story is stopped somewhere in middle…?
Anyway, endless thanks for this story. You have my love…
I hope you comeback anytime in the future!
TinyLady chapter 20 . 3/29
Oh please Severus! PLEASE tell me your… 'curse' was miscasted… Harry was 'James Potter' and Lily's 'son'! Your child(or children) doesn't have to be Harry Snape… not Chosen One… they are, they must be different! Oh, please…
TinyLady chapter 14 . 3/28
What a lovely chapter!
-Before I write some more 'proper' review, I should say this.
And yes, this young, overly logical Severus!
'For the sake of Wizarding world'…
How adorable reasoning, M ?
Wraith chapter 21 . 3/25
bleeb90 chapter 21 . 3/23
This was a beautiful fic, and I loved it!
Wraith chapter 21 . 3/18
Love it, update?
Math725e chapter 21 . 3/18
I guise that this story is discontinued?
I just came around it and it is amazing, just wanted to say.
Thank you for one of the best harry potter story, whit Lilly and Severus.
Dem feels though.
Thank you for this amazing experience.
Yours truly dedicated reader
Laura chapter 21 . 2/7
I'm guessing this is abandoned, which is a shame, but just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it!
jfk700 chapter 1 . 1/3
Love the story, you should finish it!
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