Reviews for The Apprentice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story and Snape's voice, what great pity that it is unfinished... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Apprentice, the first of a three-part Lily/Severus epic, updates at least once every two weeks. It is fully outlined and will not dwindle off into the ether before its completion, I assure you. LES MOTS DE L'AUTEUR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed reading this. It’s a shame it was abandoned but if I employ my imagination, I like to think that they got their HEA and that Master J survives too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly an exceptional work, that I dare say exceeds its source material. This work is of above publish-able quality. Thank you for writing it, I thoroughly enjoyed the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Despite the fact this was not updated in a decade I really hope it will be finished someday. You created an very interesting and realistic plot, the story is well written and Snape's acerbic, bone-dry thoughts and remarks are beautifully spot on and from a 16 year old absolutely hilarious. Great reading even unfinished. |
![]() ![]() What a very lovely story! I love your portrayal of, well, everyone, including OC-with-canon-name Arsenius Jigger. I hope you're well out there and that you'll find the time/inspiration/whatever you need to publish more some day (I've read a fic that was finished after a hiatus of 12 years, so...). Also: writing, and therefore writing fanfic, is for all ages! Don't let such silly notions discourage you! Thank you for this wonderful tale so far :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() u good? you haven't updated in a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent, vraiment dommage qu'elle soit abandonnée, mais merci pour ce bon moment de lecture même si trop court |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so fascinating. I truly hope you come back to it someday and give it realnclosure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed too much at some scenes, I loved the story and I feel enormous frustration knowing that this fanfiction is abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idk why this fic is so funny. In its own way, you know. And seriously Wilkes? You're asking a teacher, a proffessor, to assist you in order for you to humiliate him. Well, a terrible teacher from my perspective, but still a teacher. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you see, imagining Snape wearing sunglasses is wayyy funnier so I'm just gonna do that from now on. And his dramatic way of leaving is just a perfect combination for his sunglasses. Sassy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next week... I’m still waiting almost 10 years later :( this is an amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an interesting story. I do feel like it properly dives into the mindset of Snape. Too bad it hadn't updated in so long. |