I really liked this story and Snape's voice, what great pity that it is unfinished...

The Apprentice, the first of a three-part Lily/Severus epic, updates at least once every two weeks. It is fully outlined and will not dwindle off into the ether before its completion, I assure you.
LES MOTS DE L'AUTEUR!

Really enjoyed reading this. It’s a shame it was abandoned but if I employ my imagination, I like to think that they got their HEA and that Master J survives too

Truly an exceptional work, that I dare say exceeds its source material. This work is of above publish-able quality.

Thank you for writing it, I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

Despite the fact this was not updated in a decade I really hope it will be finished someday. You created an very interesting and realistic plot, the story is well written and Snape's acerbic, bone-dry thoughts and remarks are beautifully spot on and from a 16 year old absolutely hilarious. Great reading even unfinished.

What a very lovely story! I love your portrayal of, well, everyone, including OC-with-canon-name Arsenius Jigger. I hope you're well out there and that you'll find the time/inspiration/whatever you need to publish more some day (I've read a fic that was finished after a hiatus of 12 years, so...). Also: writing, and therefore writing fanfic, is for all ages! Don't let such silly notions discourage you!
Thank you for this wonderful tale so far :-)

u good? you haven't updated in a while

excellent, vraiment dommage qu'elle soit abandonnée, mais merci pour ce bon moment de lecture même si trop court

This story is so fascinating. I truly hope you come back to it someday and give it realnclosure.

I laughed too much at some scenes, I loved the story and I feel enormous frustration knowing that this fanfiction is abandoned.

I love it!

Idk why this fic is so funny. In its own way, you know.

And seriously Wilkes? You're asking a teacher, a proffessor, to assist you in order for you to humiliate him. Well, a terrible teacher from my perspective, but still a teacher.

Well, you see, imagining Snape wearing sunglasses is wayyy funnier so I'm just gonna do that from now on. And his dramatic way of leaving is just a perfect combination for his sunglasses. Sassy.

Next week... I’m still waiting almost 10 years later :( this is an amazing story

Quite an interesting story. I do feel like it properly dives into the mindset of Snape.

Too bad it hadn't updated in so long.