|Reviews for And Two Devious Wolves|
| bakaneko227 chapter 8 . 1/11
I loved this! Such great detail and imagery! Please, keep writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
I haven't read the original piece this follows, but my, that was absolutely disgusting.
| Atlantica227 chapter 6 . 7/19/2014
Finally! Someone else who's kinky as me! Hey, if you PM me I bet we could write some pretty good stuff.
| Atlantica227 chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
What, did he pick the lock? Or climb in some random window?
| Schneebly chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
Please tell me that this is not the end.
Please tell me you have just forgotten to update for two years.
Please tell me that there will be more of this fic.
I need more of it. It's perfect. I love this entire story, I love that it's not just mindless and continuous smut, it's got drama and complication and jealousy and everything that you need in a fic, but there's still so much smut. And it's fabulously written smut at that, it's incredibly descriptive, and you have managed to keep the characters in character throughout the entire thing. That is a hard thing to do. I mean, not all characters are sex material, but you have made them perfect for whatever kinky shit they might be doing.
Please, I need you to write more of this. Honestly, this is one of my favourite FrUk/UsUk fanfics that I've read, and trust me, I have read a lot of them. Keep this story going, it's amazing!
Also, I'm rooting for Francis. FrUk is one of my OTPs, and I think that the way they're set up in this story is too perfect to ignore or deny.
| SangoSnow26 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
So I read the original story a while back, but at that time I didn't ever realize there was a sequel. I definitely didn't realize there was one as incredibly sexy and heartbreakingly and breathtaking beautiful as this one. To be honest, I dont write reviews that often, simply because I find it hard to express my thoughts at times, and I especially wouldn't usually on a story that hasn't been updated in so long, but on this, I figured I had to. Your writing style is lovely and their emotions feel so real and powerful. And despite the fact that this is a crazy situation, I can truly see the characters shining through in a completely IC sort of way. There is so much conflict and confusion, I truly don't see how Arthur takes it. His struggle makes my chest hurt and I completely feel for him, even though I realize he should really make a choice.
This story truly captivates me and tugs on my heart strings. I am honestly a through and through FrUK shipper, with only a slight interest in UsUk, but this story made me feel so much for both pairings. Alfred's feelings for Arthur are absolutely adorable and I honestly find it hard to bear the thought of him possibly ending up alone...However, I have to say I'm still rooting for FrUK. Francis' feelings for Arthur are completely and utterly beautiful. He cares for him and tries to be as selfless as he can by telling Arthur he would still be there for him no matter what as long as he was happy, and yet he's yearned for him for so many years that he cant help but want to be loved by him in return. While it was tear-jerking for Alfred to catch them in the bathroom like that, but it was equally tear-jerking to see how much Francis wanted all of his attention just for those few moments. That scene and the one against the mirror...just wow. They were incredibly hot and emotional at the same time. At the end of the day, I think Francis' feelings for him are more mature, and the fact that he was willing to let him go and still be beside him, makes me think he deserves him all the more. Besides, he said himself that he knows Arthur better than anyone else. They have a history that is hard to move past. Like I said before, I will feel awful for Alfred, but I think Francis and he are more suited to each other. BUT, I would be extremely happy for this story had two endings, one for each male, so that way everyone is happy :) I could honestly see both ways ((Even if I'm hoping and praying for Francis)) Although, I would be happy with any sort of ending at this point! I know you've seemed to move on from this story, but any sort of ending would make me so happy, you have no idea! Even just a synopsis about where the story would've went! I know it's a lot to ask, but you are such an incredibly amazing and talented writer that I feel almost addicted to this story. Never seeing it completed would be awful. No pressure though, as this story, completed or not is truly a gift in itself. Thank you for creating such a captivating story and you will have my undying love and respect if you ever decide to finish it!
| Vyscaris chapter 8 . 3/14/2014
One of the top five FrUKUS fanfictions I've read so far- I don't know whether it was how accurately the three were portrayed, top grade writing or the wonderfully narrated smut. All of the above actually. I would love if it was continued yet the ending came out great as is, with no definite selection between the two but gives a chance for both ships to stand a chance.
You're a brilliant writer, keep up the good stuff even if there's no opportunity to post it on .
| MessyThoughts chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
I love the nicknames Alfred calls Arthur! They're so cute (ゝω・)
I'm really looking forward to an update, but it's been a year since the last one...
| Anon chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
AIR DUCTS *flail* HE WENT THROUGH THE AIR DUCTS O_O
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Wow, I really love this fanfic. The way you portrait the relationships between England and the other two is just simply perfect. You give a good reason why each one loves Arthur and why he return the feelings but the fact that he still has a bit of doubt about where go for it or not, and the fact that he thinks that choosing one over the other would destroy the 'loser' just spice things up.
I love America here, he is sweet and charming, but still with a strong will and force, his love is true and he is decided, not willing to give up, even if I find the 'Oh you left me in the revolution and I'm afraid you'll do it again!' short of cliche, it's handled here a lot, /a lot/ better than most UsUk fanfics out there, using it like a valid reason for Arthur's doubts on him.
And France, oh France, he had loved England for all this years like an admiration of some shorts and hide it because of all their historical fights, he knows him like the palm of his hand. I don't see why people don't think his love is as true as Alfred's.
Even if I would love a threesome ending. (Common America! You can learn to love France, everybody does) or at least some where Arthur has too much pressure on him he can't choose. (Then I would not weep for Francis or Alfred for a whole night, just 'oh, well that could have be a lot worse.')
I'm putting my bet on Alfred. (Definitely not because I'm a rabbid UsUk shipper, on the contrary.) But I find that Francis is a lot more mature than him (I loved how he explained to England that he even if he end not choosing him, he would not like to change what they were before.) And he could hand rejection better than America (Who would probably cry to his sleep listening to MCR).
Lastly, in my personal opinion, go for what really you want. (Even if either way I'll feel bad for the losing part) And if you don't want to anger and/or make cry single shippers, go for either an open ending, or make two alternative endings and specify it, any ways you end it it's perfect.
tl;dr Amazing fanfic, good portrait of both parings, Alfred had more chances, because Francis can handle rejection better, and the ending is up to you really.
P.S. Why can't people just FRUKUS? I thought the deadly shipping battle was over some time ago...
| Jam chapter 8 . 2/5/2013
Wuah, I can't believe how Good this is! I want to desperatly know What Will happen next! Seperate dates, that would be so sweet! Ihhh!-
| Mars and Kitkat chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
This was such a beautiful written chapter, I can't even contain how hard I'm getting my feels right now.
God, you're such an amazing writer. Definitely my favourite on , and probably one of my top ever. I adore all of your stories, with this series being the loveliest in my opinion.
You're always able to capture such emotion and imagery in the scenes, I feel like I'm able to picture exactly what Arthur's thinking or saying. And you're just dazzling as this particular trio. Especially in the scene when they finally got to the DP, and it became completely clear how blank Arthur's mind was. I pictured and heard it completely.
Anyways, I'll always adore this story, and thank you for being so amazing!
| Hut chapter 8 . 10/23/2012
Love it to death... Im like stunned, that's how Good it was! FrUkUs for the win, for sure.
| Empress Vegah chapter 8 . 10/17/2012
I am sorry for not reviewing,but hnnnnnggggghhhhh I JUST LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
YES THEY FINALLY HAVE SEX
AND YES ALFRED PENETRATED HIM FIRST! You must know how happy I am with this! YAAAAAAYYYYYY!
And also, Arthur was making out with him moooooreeee than Francis, YAYYYYY! XD
You know my sentiments about fruk right? XDDD
I threw my phone when I read a possible fluffy-cute scene between Francis and Arthur. OH MY GOSH HAHAHAAHA! I've totally caught off guard! ToT My poor Babbu Alfred! EEEEEHHH!
But the best thing of all was the DP! Just like how everything started! It was a perfect ending to the chapter! I am so happy! XDDDD
Hope to see more of this! XDDD
| watch-me-write chapter 8 . 10/11/2012
I stayed up all night to read this fic and ended up going to bed sometime around 7AM. And I actually think I ended up dreaming about it, the smut in it was so damn strong and vivid. Thank you. Oh bloody hell, thank you. You...you definitely hit the mark, and then some!
Obviously, my ideal ending is that they all just end up staying together -shrug- But it's clear that won't happen. So, in case you're still on the ropes about which one for Arthur to end up with, I personally wish for USUK :) I love them both, really, but I'm also very biased towards Alfred actually; I love him to bits, he's just so cute and I'm quite emotionally attached to him now o.O When he barged in on Francis and Arthur in the bathroom and he was so devastated and upset with tears in his eyes, I wanted to cry. I literally couldn't stop whimpering because I felt so bad for him, haha. It's weird that I also enjoy those typically "American" terms of endearments he keeps calling Arthur (baby, darlin', babycakes, babe, etc), weird because it feels so...cliche? Maybe? I'm not too sure XD But I like it, it suits him a lot, especially with the accent (-shiver- X3) and though I've never been a fan of America, I seriously think Alfred is affecting my thoughts on America as a whole. It's interesting but typical that it takes an anime character for me to look a little deeper into a country I've, overall, disliked for quite a while :P Ah, how I love Alfred. I think he's good for Arthur, too. But that's just my opinion, I just thought as a reader, I may as well let you know :)
Wonderful, wonderful story. Aahh. I look forward to the dates! X3 Also, though...I wonder what Francis was going to suggest how they "do it" before Alfred dismissed him completely and totally. I'm kind of at a loss as to how else they could possible "do it" XD LOL, update again soon, it's brilliant! :)