Reviews for Morty's Incredible Gym
FatedDusk chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL.

I have nothing more to say one the matter.
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Oh my gawd, this just totally cracks me up. Volk? Seriously? Well, I suppose Flint's still alive because he's flint...and I don't blame mystery trainer for turning tail. It seems to me you've got hyphens instead of dashes, but apart from that I fell in love with this fic. Definitely something I'm going to come back to and read again. Maybe I should get back to my SS game too. My Eevee evolved into Umbreon too early and has screwed things up. And Volkner and Jasmine are just aww. Even if Jasmine didn't actually appear...
imperator furiosa chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Ah, this was hilarious! Volkner WOULD be the OCD type, and that Trainer is just like, "WTF?" the whole time. XD
wolfeclipse25 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I love it how Volkner's ok with throwing himself into a dark abyss 58 times.
kitkit11183 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Holy cow. This was hilarious. I can see Volkner as an obsessive compulsive type as well. Also, poor trainer.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
That was hilarious!
DumbWitch chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
This story was super awesome! Great job. I love how Flint completely freaks out when they fall over the edge XD
briochee chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Oh god, this was hilarious to read! I was laughing out loud! Yeah, I never thought of him that way but I can definitely see Volkner as the OCD type. Great job!

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PokemonLuver chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
lmao! i love this story! i too fell off the floor a bajillion times but being the stubborn person i am i kept walking off the same place in the front of the gym! XD i havent played in sinnoh but i do like volkner flint and buck from that region and i do belive its a supernatural having to do with mortys ghosts that would drive volkner utterly insane :3 -Hannah
An Author's Pen chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
This was great! I laughed a lot. I agree with your idea of Volkner dragging Flint into things too when he's not depressed and of course he loves mechanics.
Hey Bro Ashley's Here chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This fic is amazing! I liked it!
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I LOVE YOUU!
okay, not really, but in a
platonic sense.

Back to the review: this was a highly entertaining read. On my HeartGold, I also kept falling enough. Not 58 times, but, pretty close. XD I love Volker and his OCD-ness. You really captured both Flint's and his personalities in this piece.
And I loved the little references to Alexandrianshipping. Squee.

I feel bad for that poor trainer. "Kamikaze attack?" I would have given him a hug and a blanket and a warm bowl of soup.

Yes. Morty is magic. Volkner doesn't believe in that kind of stuff, so he'll never have an awesome gym like Mort's.

So...yay for you! :D
Professor Stein chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
That was absolutely wonderful! And then this poor, gutless trainer gets to witness their extreme insanity. Utterly brilliant!
Yozoro-Kitsune chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Oh, my god. Finally someone who agrees that that bridge would be terrifying to walk over in real life. But seriously, if I wouldn't die I'd have a field day jumping off the side and landing at the entrance over and over again. It'd be like Portal, minus the probability of dying.

I laughed during this entire story, though~! Oh, Volkner. Forever trying to be the best. Maybe if they remake Gen IV, your gym will be a combination of the two! Oh, I honestly hope not.
Ability King KK chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I can't believe Volkner traveled all the way from Sinnoh to Johto just to fall into a dark abyss. Hilarious, especially since he dragged Flint along for the ride.

If Volkner was smart, instead of taking over the world if he had ghostly powers, he should use them on Cynthia to get her off his back. Think of how much peace and quiet he'd get.

Lastly, liked the mention of Volkner x Jasmine. One of my fav pairings.
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