|Reviews for Sailor Ronin|
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
| cevgar chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Yes, there are more chapters that I haven't read yet, but in this case the first impressions are somewhat important. That is because I wasn't expecting much out of this. A LH/SM cross? You can imagine my surprise when the fic turned out to be... not awful. Maybe you can't. Well, I was surprised. Shocked even. This fic seems both well written and fun. It keeps with the general LH tone, but still shows loads of potential. And no, I'm not just saying that because Su is criminally underused. Or because I want to see Haruka and Tsuruko in crazy Su-ified senshi getup. (drifts off to happy place)
| Innortal chapter 3 . 11/5/2010
Great humor as always, excellent use of the characters.
| Neurotic with hair chapter 3 . 11/4/2010
I'd say you worries about the character aren't needed though some characterizations always get lost from the transition from manga/anime to fanfiction. Only thing I see that is different about the senshi is that Makoto hasn't gone on a spiel about Keitaro being like he "old senpai" or some such thing with Keitaro's luck and all. Though, in relation to the attacks there are some that you aren't using and some that you skipped over as in from Fire soul- Flame sniper- Burning Mandala, would be the natural progression of the spell, but then again with you not knowing where in the series you're putting the story it's come out splendidly. I'm liking the story, it has a great flow.
| Neurotic with hair chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I'll have to say it's interesting and has lots of potential comedy in it. Though I have to ask can Keitaro actually die because I'm not sure they made it possible in the love hina story for him to get critically hurt. Still a fun read, I'll keep watch.
| animefan29 chapter 3 . 11/4/2010
So these Youkai want to kill the Senshi but not harm civilians? What exactly is their motivation?
And the only possible plot hole was the question of just when Luna sent Michiru. I mean we don't really see Luna at all this chapter till the end but we see Michiru chasing one of the Kama-Itachi. Though its a minor issue. We do see Jirou getting back to base without being harmed so we can assume he got away and during that time Luna met up with Michiru, though it would also be safe to say that she also met up with Haruka since the time-frame makes it extremely likely that the two were still together. Besides it would be more fun for Haruka to tag along because I can see Naru mistaking her for a guy, and we know where that leads.
Anyway, fun chapter.
| NefCanuck chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Good grief, why Keitaro and Su aren't fried/dead/pasted on a wall somewhere is beyond my tiny mind to understand :D
| Wonderbee31 chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
That was awesome, and looks like Kei's luck continues to hold out huh, with him managing to get at least two more of the Senshi ready to beat him to death and beyond, and Motoko almost biting it except for the unexpected help there, really fun and intense.
| Delusional Fishies chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Keitaro and Su are too under powered.
| Innortal chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
As always, great read. Funny scenes as well.
| CodelyokoFan23 chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
| CodelyokoFan23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
| JKaitz chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
Hey, this fic has made crack some good old smiles, I hope you update soon.
Hmmm. I wonder if we will be seeing more sailors...
| NefCanuck chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
Y'know at this rate Keitaro is going to want to go postal on Su just because she *insists* on going in kamikaze style every time.
Strangely enough, when Keitaro is motivated he seems to be getting the hang of the suit and what he can do with it.
Uh oh, kitty done found them out, now the question is where is Luna *going* with that info because she doesn't seem to be heading back to Usagi:
"Now she just had to pass the information onto someone more capable than she at dealing with… problems."
That isn't Usagi...
Oh gods, she wouldn't be thinking of siccing Setsuna on them would she? Or scarier yet, Haruka & Michuru...
| animefan29 chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
Extreme power-up is right. I mean seriously an umbrella monster being that strong? Well at least it was a fun fight.
I wonder what Luna is planning? Well I'm sure it will fall apart when she discovers the insanity that resides in Hinata-sou. Should be fun to read.