|Reviews for Vigilante Justice|
| ebs45 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I feel stupid since I'm just reviewing this now. I read this story about a year ago and I just have to say that this was honestly the first dark story I had read on fanfic and so I thank you for taking my dark-story virginity. I loved this story and how twisted it was and I'm glad that this story was the one that took my v-card. Now I love dark stories thanks to you :D
Lots of love
| BlueCat69 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
That was… I haven’t even got words for it… disturbing, maybe…? Fan-fucking-tastic…? And I must be one sick fuck because I loved it and wished it was longer.
Thank you so much for sharing.
| FarDareisMai2 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
That was . . . wow. I think it was brilliant, and I love that it was vamp slash. You grasped, what I think, is the core of what being turned might really do to someone, how having those gifts would make them dark and twisted, not benign.
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Hmm, i like the concept of this. I liked it a lot!
| Michelle Dyer chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I've always said the only way to stop a child predator was to put a bullet between his eyes. But hell edward and jas work to lol. I know a few ppl that need bullets!
| Elicullen26 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Wow, that was dark but well written. Love vampslash, specially E&J.
Thx for sharing!
| amused-cat23 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Whoa. I acutually really enjoyed this story! I love dark themes and the blurring of taboo lines. It was creepy and sexy at the same time. Well done!
| Tjbaby chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Loved this immensely. Great work!
| AltheaJams chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This combines two of my favorite fic things - vampSlash and Batslash (I'm going through a bit of a Batman slash phase). I loved the way you wrote the "old married couple" familiarity of this Edward/Jasper dynamic duo. And I enjoyed the Carlisle backstory and their history as a couple.
The way the mind-reading and empath powers played into their vigilante process made them such a perfect team. And don't get me started on how cute they were with Edward finishing J's sentences.
I really like reading fic that pushes boundaries, but only when it fits in with the characters and story, as opposed to being inserted for shock value. And I thought this walked that fine line perfectly. The boundary-pushing way that they took out their target wasn't really gross or shocking because it is such a natural extension of who they are, and what you established as their needs.
I want more! More adventures of these two, more family interaction, more of the couple outside of their mission. I think it was perfect as a oneshot, it's just my vampSlashVigilante-loving ass that is in love with the dynamic and characters you created, and obviously would love more :)
Great job and perfect for the boundary-pushing objectives of the contest for which you wrote it.
Much love, Althea
| RoseT chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Whew! That was DARK but I loved it anyway!
| ChloBoLow Hale chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I feel like I should feel guilty for liking how dark and twisted that was ... but i just can't bring myself to.
Amazing o/s hon'
| Darloudasha chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Awesome story. Yeah it's dark and very kink but I can totally see it.
| TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wow! my eye are glazed over with that story. Obviously the love is there and the determination to right certain wrongs seem to drive them. But wow, that is an incredible pairing and story. Talk about being in tune with each other, there is no equal for these two.
| joeybb chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
| Jay's World chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Shit. That was strong, twister (in the greatest way) absolutely fantastic. Morbid, yes, but completly captivating.