Reviews for En Pointe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow this was so weird i couldn't put it down until i finished. How sad that it is not complete but... girl what an imagination! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can someone help me find a story? A vampire kidnaps a woman and her two children and genetically makes them into vampires like him. He brainwashes her into thinking he’s been her husband the whole time. I think it was a twilight fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, now I'm upset. You didn't finish the story. You could have indicated that it was unfinished. I guess I won't try any more of your stories. What you wrote was amazing, though. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward is trying to be a good mate, but his possessiveness keeps interfering. Now Aro is back. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe Edward just needed a wake-up call. Bella got her point across before he broke the cuffs. Now, he's acting like a caring Dom. I hope he can keep that mindset. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are mates. Maybe Volturi were watching, but he was more cruel than necessary for appearances. He liked hurting her. Can he accept a gentler form of pain? Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is protective of her baby. She's also going to take more control over her life. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() She got away and she's with Edward. What will he do when he discovers she's pregnant? Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leah is now sort of a friend. Bella's learning how to fight. Jake won't give up. But... Bella's pregnant and Jake used a condom, but Edward didn't. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jake is claiming Bella but she won't accept it. Sam's right. She's different. Sort of half-vamp. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward and Bella said their piece to each other. I think they both need each other and are too stubborn to admit it. But Bella is right to be angry. He shouldn't have shared. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() It had to happen. After her erotic dream, Jake 'made love' to her. At least she orgasmed, so it wasn't all disappointment and bad smell. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward's process of drinking from Bella must have left some venom in her bloodstream. She not only smells like a vampire, she's healing faster. She can smell wolf like the vampires can. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward really had no choice. They wanted to taste sexually aroused blood. I'm assuming it was Caius because he wouldn't care if he broke the vessel. Bella was so upset; not only in extreme pain, but mortified that Edward would allow it to happen. Treaty be damned. She's leaving or will die trying. Judy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've heard that ginger is excruciatingly painful. Bella managed to reach the subspace that turns pain to pleasure. Judy |