Reviews for En Pointe
i heart clash chapter 15 . 9/8/2023
I’m guessing this story will remain unfinished but what I’ve read of it was mighty good! Thanks for the fantastic read~~
mariadisales chapter 15 . 2/19/2022
wow this was so weird i couldn't put it down until i finished. How sad that it is not complete but... girl what an imagination!
Cassiemay112 chapter 1 . 2/13/2022
Can someone help me find a story? A vampire kidnaps a woman and her two children and genetically makes them into vampires like him. He brainwashes her into thinking he’s been her husband the whole time. I think it was a twilight fanfic
grandmachix chapter 15 . 2/17/2021
Ok, now I'm upset. You didn't finish the story. You could have indicated that it was unfinished. I guess I won't try any more of your stories. What you wrote was amazing, though.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 14 . 2/17/2021
Edward is trying to be a good mate, but his possessiveness keeps interfering. Now Aro is back.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 13 . 2/17/2021
Maybe Edward just needed a wake-up call. Bella got her point across before he broke the cuffs. Now, he's acting like a caring Dom. I hope he can keep that mindset.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 12 . 2/17/2021
They are mates. Maybe Volturi were watching, but he was more cruel than necessary for appearances. He liked hurting her. Can he accept a gentler form of pain?
Judy
grandmachix chapter 11 . 2/17/2021
Bella is protective of her baby. She's also going to take more control over her life.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 10 . 2/17/2021
She got away and she's with Edward. What will he do when he discovers she's pregnant?
Judy
grandmachix chapter 9 . 2/17/2021
Leah is now sort of a friend. Bella's learning how to fight. Jake won't give up. But... Bella's pregnant and Jake used a condom, but Edward didn't.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 8 . 2/17/2021
Jake is claiming Bella but she won't accept it. Sam's right. She's different. Sort of half-vamp.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 7 . 2/17/2021
Edward and Bella said their piece to each other. I think they both need each other and are too stubborn to admit it. But Bella is right to be angry. He shouldn't have shared.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 6 . 2/17/2021
It had to happen. After her erotic dream, Jake 'made love' to her. At least she orgasmed, so it wasn't all disappointment and bad smell.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 5 . 2/17/2021
Edward's process of drinking from Bella must have left some venom in her bloodstream. She not only smells like a vampire, she's healing faster. She can smell wolf like the vampires can.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 4 . 2/17/2021
Edward really had no choice. They wanted to taste sexually aroused blood. I'm assuming it was Caius because he wouldn't care if he broke the vessel. Bella was so upset; not only in extreme pain, but mortified that Edward would allow it to happen. Treaty be damned. She's leaving or will die trying.
Judy
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