You have a hidden talent. Please keep hiding it! Seriously, you lot always have the brightest idea but the most retarded execution. How the fuck does that even happen?

This is a Fantastic story! Thank You so very much for sharing it with all of us. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories. so until later take care and stay Happy, Healthy and Strong.

Story was good. But Daphne was still a dominating bitch here. I don't understand and don't advocate girls screaming feminism and equality while being the very pictures of hypocrisy. If Harry had slapped Daphne she would have screamed abusive husband. If Daphne is being protective of Harry , worried for him and behaved according to her nature if she was a Siren then it is her nature and right to be over protective or protective. Last I checked it's no sin, no crime not even emotionally damaging especially in the kind of situation Harry was preventing Daphne from going. And that was a casual protective dialogue. Also, that bitch will remove Harry's children from him for just worrying about them instead of having husband wife and family talk or going to a Counsellor. I hate Daphne.

Oh good someone showed or highlighted Hermione's flaws as well even if they were shown through making her a manipulative fake friend. But I always feel that Ron aside from his insecurities and jealousies which thankfully were shortlived but were always at crucial times was more understanding of Harry. He got to make Harry relax and give him a place where he could be himself completely. Ron also had more faith in Harry and his intelligence than Hermione when he was not being a jerk. Hermione never considered Harry's suggestions seriously and underestimated his intelligence as witnessed in Deathly Hallows. She was nagging to the point of annoying too .

I just reread this and had so much fun. Thanks so much for writing it and sharing it with us!

Interesting story. I enjoyed the way you dealt with Tom, although it got a little dark — thought at first you were going for a humorous approach. Much of the rest of the story seemed, if somewhat lacking in tension. Of course, I think this was primarily about the sex…..

The way Harry is causing Moldyshorts to act in the story reminds me of one of Bobmin’s stories, the dragon ones, where Harry is describing how his dragon affected him seemed like a forbidden potion, the Lust of Eros, if I remember correctly… It was described as a potion that would make a “retired vicar become a rampaging rapist” or something to that effect.

only on chapter two and i have found a new love. im usually harmony lover but i found this on a recomendation and i have to say it it definitely well written. only thing i think you need to improve is showing the passage of time more clearly.

This entire chapter basically shows how schizo modern women can be.

Although I found it interesting that Voldemort was ultimately defeated by lust basically, I would have liked his siren powers in battle or some other way of extending the story before killing Voldy... I loved the story anyway... :D

Best Regards,

Another brilliant story from you. If you could come up with your own scenario and characters you have it in you to be a professional author.

Loved this fic. I cried a couple times especially when they were forced to separate at the beginning.

I’ll probably end up reading it again soon lol.

:) :)

Very much liked the story. Thank you author.

Harry Potter is a fucking horny teenager. He is nowhere near the concept of mature like