Reviews for Two Hearts Beat as One
FairoNeko chapter 1 . 2/21/2011

I don't understang what she said in the end
oboekid chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Beautiful. Just beautiful.

I see you have begun replacing phrases like "spiraling towards destruction." with other powerful doom and gloomy phrases. Shame, really, although it definitely adds a new dimension to your writing. However, I still think "He opened his eyes and blackness still pervaded everything" might have been even more intriguing (or something) if it had been "He opened his eyes and spiraled towards destruction." I mean, just think about it.

I had to look up what strumpet meant. And then it made me laugh.