Reviews for Secret
Morghen chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
This was amazing. I loved how strongly she felt for Marlene but she couldn't/wouldn't tell her. That happens so often in real life and I think that it makes the poem so much more realistic.

"So you don't breathe a word.

You don't tell a soul.

And your secret is kept intact.

(While your heart is lef g.)"

I loved that part. It was so beautifully worded.

Amazing job!

-Morghen
sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Soooo absolutely fabulousss. :)))
Dream of Many Dreams chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Poor Alice. I keep reading your works and it now almost seems as if Marlene and Alice truely belong together. I like the poem. I think this is my favorite part:

It's a secret that comes down to

Many things

(like blond & deepdeepdeep brown eyes

& a spitfire personality)

But can be summed up in

One word:

( e.)

It takes something that is so complicated (Marlene herself, Alices desire for Marlene, the war, Frank) and makes it simple. Good Job!
hiddlestons chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I love the last line. And although this pairing is quite strange, the freeverse is very interesting. I like the way that you portrayed Alice's feelings; it was very emotional and realistic. Nicely done!

-ESS
ginevraweasleyrocks chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
It was excellent!

I can't write freeverse honestly but this was very well done!
Screaming Faeries chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I've always wanted to do one of these, but I don't think I really have the confidence! You did it and do it, greatly of course. Unimaginable pairing, I love it. Great work.
Perchance A Primrose chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Although I love Alice/ Frank, I'm being to become a fan of AliceMarlene. Good job